Birds

Spastic in flight,
Fluttering wings,
Hard landing,
Proud demeanor,
Not totally new to life,
but very new to living life,
The Mother lands next to her young,
after providing overhead protection and guided independence,
The little ones wings open,
"Look at all the seeds I found" his pronounced stance screams! 
Mouth open....
Mom snaps down at the seeds like a bench player in the dugout waiting for the call from the coach. 
Taking her impatience out on the seed.
Peck,
Snap back,
another string cut as the summer takes over springs yield, 
Up to the telephone wires,
strung pole to pole,
Little flights for the little one to practice landings, 
her little bird,
spastic lift off to another wire,
Father away,
The call,
The honing the skills,
turning her baby into the next bird of high wire northeast flight,
The new days gift to me, 
Witnessing the beautiful love  of her child.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Spagnola Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 9:34 AM
"another string cut" I absolutely adore the way you authored the beauty of love. A mixture of acquired and innate teachings, from ambling to ambulatory :), jill
Liquori Avatar
June 25, 2015 at 9:01 AM
Dear Jill, Thank you for the review and kind words. I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did watching and then penning this view. Be well.
Andresen Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:55 AM
- A great poem, Mike - // Anne-Lise :)
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June 25, 2015 at 9:03 AM
Dear Anne Lise, Thank you your words this mean much to me, coming from one of my fav's...
Christian Avatar
June 24, 2015 at 8:17 AM
Good write
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June 25, 2015 at 9:04 AM
Diane, Thank you for the time to read "Bids" I hope you enjoyed and peruse again some of the other writings.
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