Birds

Birds are great Birds are nice I like birds Birds Birds like seed I like seed I like birds Birds

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John Posey

Date: 9/8/2014 6:40:00 PM

I like birds with rice.... enough said..... great creative writing... welcome to PSoup ......... regards..... Jake

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 9/5/2014 8:11:00 AM

I admire your equation with birds even with different variables. Simple short touching stanzas. Well done J. RAJAT INDIA

Asad Aamir

Date: 8/29/2014 9:02:00 AM

This poem is so chill. Enjoyed reading it very much!

Skat A

Date: 8/27/2014 7:48:00 PM

JAMES, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/24/2014 8:05:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, James - I choose your first great written free verse - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/22/2014 6:50:00 PM

Cute. Birds are nice. Welcome to poetry soup James ;)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/22/2014 2:40:00 PM

ha I like birds, too, James,,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@