Birds

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seaguls in the sea ~low expectatations to reach~ easy life to live eagles above clouds ~small eyes with a big vision~ catch life at first sight Sleeping at daytime ~those great strangers in the night~ owls are heard sometimes cuckoo bird in spring ~its delightful sound to ears missed with august mist the nightingale sings every season, small but huge ~he stays forever~ travellinng always ~albatross surfs the blue sky coming back to home clever hunter hawks ~up from the hights stalking the preys~ lunch served in the air ones or the others big or small ~the birds' song brings happiness in life

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Bill Baker

Date: 9/14/2023 4:25:00 PM

A lovely variety of types of birds in this fine multiple verse Haiku, My friend. A creative masterpiece and a FAV for my list. Exquisite poetry, Maria. Have a joyful day! Bill

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/15/2023 12:26:00 AM

Hi Bill. I"m very glad you liked this set of hailus.I appreciate your kind words. Enjoy the weekend Bill. Blessings....!

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/13/2023 9:39:00 AM

What a lovely poem using several of the Haiku form dear Maria. Very clever! A very good description that depicts each bird individually. Great lines,’ Catch life at first sight’, those great strangers in the night’. Lovely! So enjoyed it. Thank you. Hugs to you. Xxx

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/13/2023 10:15:00 AM

Good evening Christina. A few months ago I couldn't understand too much Haiku poetry, but actually is becoming one of my favourite poetry forms for reading. For writing I'm still training...haha. I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thank you so much for your time, reading and commenting. Big hug to youxxx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 9/12/2023 4:28:00 PM

What a lovely, soft poem. Each Haiku is complete in and of itself. Hard for me to pick just one. You certainly described quite well the individual birds from the seagull (lazy) , from the strong eagle, to the hawk. I just found your string of Haikus captivating. have a great evening

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 9/13/2023 12:45:00 AM

Hello Sara, thank you so much for reading me and for your nice words. I'm happy you enjoyed them. Blessings. Have a nice day...!