Notes About The Poem

Birds

seaguls in the sea
   ~low expectatations to reach~
     easy life to live

eagles above clouds
    ~small eyes with a big vision~
                 catch life at first sight

                 Sleeping at daytime
   ~those great strangers in the night~
          owls are heard sometimes

cuckoo bird in spring
           ~its delightful sound to ears
missed with august mist

                  the nightingale sings
 every season, small but huge
               ~he stays forever~

 travellinng always
    ~albatross surfs the blue sky
                coming back to home

              clever hunter hawks
~up from the hights stalking the preys~
 lunch served in the air

ones or the others
  big or small ~the birds' song brings
                         happiness in life
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Baker Avatar
September 14, 2023 at 4:25 PM
A lovely variety of types of birds in this fine multiple verse Haiku, My friend. A creative masterpiece and a FAV for my list. Exquisite poetry, Maria. Have a joyful day! Bill
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 12:26 AM
Hi Bill. I"m very glad you liked this set of hailus.I appreciate your kind words. Enjoy the weekend Bill. Blessings....!
Bowring Avatar
September 13, 2023 at 9:39 AM
What a lovely poem using several of the Haiku form dear Maria. Very clever! A very good description that depicts each bird individually. Great lines,’ Catch life at first sight’, those great strangers in the night’. Lovely! So enjoyed it. Thank you. Hugs to you. Xxx
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September 13, 2023 at 10:15 AM
Good evening Christina. A few months ago I couldn't understand too much Haiku poetry, but actually is becoming one of my favourite poetry forms for reading. For writing I'm still training...haha. I'm glad you enjoyed them. Thank you so much for your time, reading and commenting. Big hug to youxxx
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