Birds

wing through wispy clouds plumed denizens of the sky~ I just envy you March. 14. 2022 Bird Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor - Tania Kitchin

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/18/2022 9:08:00 AM

I understand this fully; my ultimate dream is to fly also in the daytime, not just at night while I am supposedly "dreaming".

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/14/2022 7:33:00 PM

Valsa, this is a well-written Haiku. I had a good time reading this one. I really enjoy the wispy clouds in the background. They are just stunning.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/14/2022 6:25:00 PM

I'm with you too, here. O, to fly away from life down here and to soar above it all. ~ Wishful Thinker

Silent One

Date: 3/14/2022 2:01:00 PM

lovely imagery in your haiku..

Rico Leffanta

Date: 3/14/2022 12:00:00 PM

Snow-white Fairy terns prefer Hawai'i to Russia during the winter months, and their joy in soaring after each other - and aerial displays, are indeed a beautiful sight! Aloha!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2022 7:14:00 AM

I often wondered what it would be like to soar like an eagle but alas, I probably would have motion sickness so look out below. I enjoyed reading this one. I like those wispy clouds as well. They are so beautiful. Your visit to my page was encouraging. Sara