Bird With No Wings

What is a bird without wings?
A bee without honey?
A writer with no pen?
A wealthy man with no money?
That's how I feel
When you're not with me
One side of me is full
While the other is empty
I love you with my heart
And with all my soul
But when you're not here
My spirit is lonely and cold
I need the warmth of your touch
To take away my pain
Without you with me
My life won't be the same
So if you read this poem
Please know these words are true
A dearly, honestly want to say
I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/28/2011 2:56:00 PM
Great first poem for this site. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this essay.
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Date: 1/28/2011 2:11:00 PM
OMg I didn't even know my peom was feautred until today...wow i'm late lol!!
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Date: 1/28/2011 11:11:00 AM
Im not a scholar nor a critic, but I can relate to the emotion of this poem. I would suggest , no matter how much you learn about writing, remember that feelings are all we really have, and you convey yours well.
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Date: 1/28/2011 7:57:00 AM
absolutely amazing
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Destini. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 5:09:00 PM
Just wanted to say beautiful write and congrats
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..
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Date: 1/22/2011 8:22:00 AM
from what i have seen, you are well on your way to becoming a great poet. you express your creativity very well. just try to practice writing as many forms as you can. to be a complete writer, you should be able to adapt your style to any form. keep practicing and keep up the good work. p.s. check your soup mail when you get a chance.
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Date: 1/9/2011 6:10:00 AM
No bad at all.... very good poetry my friend.. looking forward to reading more of your work....Michael
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Date: 1/8/2011 5:11:00 PM
Please comment whteher good or bad. If bad please tell me what I need to improve. I'm still young and I love writing poetry and I aspire to be an author of some sort. So again... pLease COMMENT!
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