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Bird With No Wings

What is a bird without wings? A bee without honey? A writer with no pen? A wealthy man with no money? That's how I feel When you're not with me One side of me is full While the other is empty I love you with my heart And with all my soul But when you're not here My spirit is lonely and cold I need the warmth of your touch To take away my pain Without you with me My life won't be the same So if you read this poem Please know these words are true A dearly, honestly want to say I love you

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/28/2011 2:56:00 PM

Great first poem for this site. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming throughout this essay.

Destini Williams

Date: 1/28/2011 2:11:00 PM

OMg I didn't even know my peom was feautred until today...wow i'm late lol!!

Joe Inka

Date: 1/28/2011 11:11:00 AM

Im not a scholar nor a critic, but I can relate to the emotion of this poem. I would suggest , no matter how much you learn about writing, remember that feelings are all we really have, and you convey yours well.

Ashek Rahaman

Date: 1/28/2011 7:57:00 AM

absolutely amazing

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 7:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured here at PoetrySoup this week Destini. May you have many more featured. Love, Carol

Robert Shreve

Date: 1/23/2011 5:09:00 PM

Just wanted to say beautiful write and congrats

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/23/2011 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all with luv..

Dakarai Cobb

Date: 1/22/2011 8:22:00 AM

from what i have seen, you are well on your way to becoming a great poet. you express your creativity very well. just try to practice writing as many forms as you can. to be a complete writer, you should be able to adapt your style to any form. keep practicing and keep up the good work. p.s. check your soup mail when you get a chance.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/9/2011 6:10:00 AM

No bad at all.... very good poetry my friend.. looking forward to reading more of your work....Michael

Destini Williams

Date: 1/8/2011 5:11:00 PM

Please comment whteher good or bad. If bad please tell me what I need to improve. I'm still young and I love writing poetry and I aspire to be an author of some sort. So again... pLease COMMENT!