Bird of Prey

Bird of Prey

On Banyon Lake, where waterfowl dwell,
The night was tranquil and held no fear.
Until came a sound ascended from Hell.
I heard a menacing cry as I drew near.

Upon the shore no wave did break.
No whispers on the wind were heard.
Nor was there a splash on the lake.
From any waterfowl or roosting bird.

The anxious cooing of mated doves
Cried out a warning on this ominous night
They heard the screech from far above,
And trilled warning of a hungry bird in flight.

A mother swan, at the edge of the lake,
gathered her chicks beneath her wings.
It was a time to stay alert and awake.
In the face of danger, no bird dared sing.

The predator hovered high in the sky.
I saw her shadow blanket the moon.
With yet another shrill, piercing cry,
I heard the faint wail of a single loon.

There was movement among the reeds. 
The hunter circled in search of her prey.
Her only focus was to fulfill her need
Before dark gave way to light of day.

Talons lowered, she opened her beak.
Again she screamed from great height.
Eyes focused on the fish she did seek.
Upon her wings, reflected moonlight.

Down she plunged with swiftest speed.
With keen senses she was able to snare
The prize that would sate her needs,
And enough to feed her fledgling pair.

With a flap of wings she rose in the sky.
A fish clutched in the grip of her claws.
All the birds were safe. I let out a sigh.
Fulfilled was Mother Nature's basic law.

A stilt legged egret came out of hiding.
Swans craned their necks in a swoon.
Doves continued their calls and chiding.
A nightingale whistled a joyous tune.

On Banyon Lake, where waterfowl dwell,
All was peaceful, serene, and still.
Upon the water, silver moonbeams fell.
The bird of prey had eaten her fill.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/10/2025 7:37:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this info about "Bird of prey" ... poetically expressed. God bless you.
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Date: 2/8/2025 11:38:00 AM
Lin, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (9). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. Thank you for such a dynamic poem that dramatically depicts the circle of life. It's a FAV for me.
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Date: 2/8/2025 7:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Mark. I’m glad to see more poets participating.
Date: 2/4/2025 7:50:00 PM
Gripping, start to finish, an enjoyable read, a bird lives, a fish dies, such is as it is. Superbly penned, Lin.
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Date: 2/5/2025 7:08:00 AM
It's the law of nature. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughtful comments, Seeker.
Date: 11/24/2015 3:53:00 AM
Lin, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 11/22/2015 11:01:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work Lin!
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/23/2015 4:24:00 AM
Thank you, Upma.
Date: 11/22/2015 5:02:00 PM
Life is so hard in the animal world, Lin. Their life is filled with finding enough to eat and staying alive. You've expressed this so well in your poem. Congrats on your fine win! Hugs, Sandra
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/22/2015 5:08:00 PM
Thank you for coming to visit this one. I appreciate it.
Date: 10/24/2015 10:00:00 PM
I still wrestle with why God created all animals of prey. I've written several poems on the subject, trying to justify the way the act. Where I live (New England) the red-tail hawk is ubiquitous and a fierce hunter or big and small animals. Enjoyed reading your take on the subject. And thanks for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/24/2015 10:51:00 PM
Thank you for reading and for caring, Maurice.
Date: 10/20/2015 5:29:00 PM
G'day Lin... really enjoyed your poem that focused on the hawk as for me, it was easy to relate to. I have seen fish caught a number of times by hawks on the Murray River - nice flow and rhyme - catch you Lin - Lindsay
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Date: 10/20/2015 5:48:00 PM
Hey, Lindsay. I'm glad you liked it. As I was reading it to a friend, she started sighing - thinking that the hawk had her eye on one of the cygnets. She breathed a sigh of relief when the prey turned out to be a fish. lol
Date: 10/19/2015 4:25:00 PM
What a very lovely write here, I love you conveyed this it depicted imagery that brought your write to life in the sense of the readers. Your write is beautiful and excellent.........A.M.
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Date: 10/19/2015 5:20:00 PM
Thank you so very much, AM.... I'm glad that you found yourself at Banyon Lake with me.
Date: 10/18/2015 11:37:00 PM
Beautiful write Lin
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Date: 10/25/2015 10:15:00 PM
Thanks, Michael. I really appreciate your comment.
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