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Bird Migration

shades of gray journey aspiration food- nesting recurring winter 1/23/2017

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 2/1/2017 6:54:00 PM

I showed this to a few Canadian friends, they loved the poem, and smiled at the meaning it could have for us snowbirds up here!!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/25/2017 10:33:00 AM

Both the poem and the picture are delightful, Eve. Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2017 6:32:00 PM

that is a cool description of them, Eve, shades of gay that journey!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/24/2017 2:14:00 PM

:) Beautiful, Eve. Lovely haiku...I'm glad you were inspired by Paul. He is such an amazing writing. Hugs, dear. Thanks for your visit to my blog.

Judy Ball

Date: 1/24/2017 12:47:00 AM

Great Haiku Eve. I love watching the patterns the migrating birds make in the sky as they fly to their destinations. Great job and love the pic. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/23/2017 10:01:00 PM

This is either about birds, or Canadians flying down south for the winter!!! or maybe both!! LOL Great write Eve!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2017 10:14:00 PM

Hahaha... you are so funny both Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/23/2017 7:42:00 PM

- Large herds of black birds, meaning they come with death message .... I have heard from older people - A great haiku, Eve - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sunshine, I would like to hear more about the tale :) Hugs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/23/2017 12:23:00 PM

your wonderful 'ku takes flight, eve... huggs!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Nette, hugs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/23/2017 12:20:00 PM

beautiful little haiku and I love the pic Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2017 8:51:00 PM

Thank you, Jan, Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 1/23/2017 10:47:00 AM

This was nice Eve. I have seen this recently as hundreds of starlings has decided my property is the best place to eat locally. I love watching them as they ascend like a black design of the air.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/23/2017 11:21:00 AM

"Hello Chris, saw this picture on Mystic Rose facebook page and had to write a poem.... I have been seeing so many black birds landing with wings outstretched on the yards or on lines of them perched on the telephone wire. Amazing "