Bird Looked At Me

Bird stopped by and looked at me
He cocked his head to get a good look see
I said, "Hey Bird, what do you say"?
He ruffled his feathers and flew away

Not long after he stopped by again
This time he brought a friend
Their chirping sounded like scolding to me
Just because I climbed their tree

10/9/2019
Writing challenge, October, 2019 -Bird-
Sponsor- Dear heart - Wiishkobi Ode
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Roper Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Timothy, love the birds visits; congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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October 25, 2019 at 6:28 PM
Me too Eve!
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October 22, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Timothy congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this impressive poem. Well done !
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October 22, 2019 at 5:09 PM
Thank you Dear Heart! :)
Allison Avatar
October 20, 2019 at 5:34 PM
dropping back with my congrats Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 21, 2019 at 4:05 PM
Thanks Jan! :)
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October 20, 2019 at 1:35 PM
- Congratulations on your win, Timothy ... so cute and fun :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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October 21, 2019 at 4:04 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise!
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October 11, 2019 at 7:22 AM
This is a sweet poem. I enjoyed reading it this morning :)
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October 11, 2019 at 7:45 AM
Thank you Heidi, have a great day!
Awtry Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Yeah, they don't like it when you do that ;)
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October 10, 2019 at 3:27 PM
So right PS!
Allison Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 4:53 AM
What a fun poem Timothy:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 10, 2019 at 3:27 PM
Thank you Jan
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October 10, 2019 at 12:39 AM
Totally delightful, Timothy.
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October 10, 2019 at 3:28 PM
Thank you dear friend!
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