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Bird Feeder

Built for a greater purpose Offering age old seeds for free An oasis between branches Positioned for all to see Flocks congregate and listen Singing with hunger and fear They gather up a healthy harvest Then scatter away with cheer Filled to serve all year long Never struggles or complains Bravely emptying their vessel clear An endless source remains Soon their birds will migrate home A perilous path my friend Signposts that help along the way Giving to the end

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Date: 4/16/2018 12:31:00 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, PM - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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Date: 4/15/2018 12:40:00 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, P.M. Well done. Lovely poem.
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Date: 4/15/2018 9:52:00 AM
So beautifully written giving life to a bird feeder. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:46:00 PM
Congratulations, PM on your well deserved win.
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Date: 4/14/2018 9:14:00 PM
Congratulations P.M., well deserved win! Hugs Eve~`*
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Date: 3/17/2018 11:44:00 PM
This birder enjoyed this piece! And I see it won in a contest, congratulations :)
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Date: 3/12/2018 6:09:00 PM
P.M., I enjoy feeding the backyard birds all year long. Your lovely poem touched my heart. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
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Date: 3/12/2018 5:34:00 PM
Just loved everything about your poem, from the 'oasis' of the first stanza to the 'signposts' of the last...And I'm a big fan of taking an ordinary, 'unsung' object/thing and depicting its extraordinariness---which you've done superbly here. Congrats on a well-deserved trophy!! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 3/12/2018 3:35:00 PM
Lovely poem. I was impressed with the overview you provided. Well done and congrats on your winning poem, P.M.
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