Bird Feeder

built for a greater purpose
offering age old seeds for free
an oasis between branches
positioned for all to see

flocks congregate and listen
singing with hunger and fear
they gather up a healthy harvest
then scatter away with cheer

filled to serve all year long
never struggles or complains
bravely emptying their vessel clear 
an endless source remains

soon their birds will migrate home
a perilous path my friend
signposts that help along the way
giving to the end
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Barden Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 12:31 AM
Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, PM - keep up the wonderful work, my friend - "A writer writes - always!"
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April 15, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, P.M. Well done. Lovely poem.
George   Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 9:52 AM
So beautifully written giving life to a bird feeder. Many congrats on your fine win. Elaine
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April 14, 2018 at 9:46 PM
Congratulations, PM on your well deserved win.
Roper Avatar
April 14, 2018 at 9:14 PM
Congratulations P.M., well deserved win! Hugs Eve~`*
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March 17, 2018 at 11:44 PM
This birder enjoyed this piece! And I see it won in a contest, congratulations :)
Walker Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 6:09 PM
P.M., I enjoy feeding the backyard birds all year long. Your lovely poem touched my heart. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia
Wolf Avatar
March 12, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Just loved everything about your poem, from the 'oasis' of the first stanza to the 'signposts' of the last...And I'm a big fan of taking an ordinary, 'unsung' object/thing and depicting its extraordinariness---which you've done superbly here. Congrats on a well-deserved trophy!! Best wishes, Gershon
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March 12, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Lovely poem. I was impressed with the overview you provided. Well done and congrats on your winning poem, P.M.
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