Bird Code

Quartet of phone wires, Tall birds grouped higher or low, Mozart or Chopin?

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/5/2019 4:15:00 PM

Hehe. this one made me grin. Loved every precious word. Ann (Tiny little people keep watching in the garden to see if anyone noticed they moved in?)

Bernard Chan
Date: 8/7/2019 6:54:00 AM

Thank you very much, Ann :)

Warren Doll

Date: 4/19/2019 9:30:00 AM

Brilliant haiku , Bernard. Placing the birds at various heights to represent musical notes as they sing. So unique. An instant fav for me. Best Wishes~ Warren

Bernard Chan
Date: 4/21/2019 6:12:00 AM

Thank you very much, Warren. Appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/16/2019 9:34:00 PM

Ha! Nice! I can see it. Been known to paint birds on wires ;) xomo!

Bernard Chan
Date: 2/17/2019 4:06:00 AM

Thank you, Maureen. Would love to see your birds on wires :))