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Bipolar Zen

Unhappy face then
   Happy face now forms again
      Zen      a transitory friend


Copyright 3/11/14

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Daver Austin

October 20, 2014 at 11:22 AM

Don't know much about Zen, but do know bipolar. Good stuff. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Angie Thomas

April 5, 2014 at 1:16 AM

Woah dude... bipolar in a nutshell. great work!!

Brian Cooper

April 9, 2014 at 6:04 AM

Thank you for your kindness. Brian

Kim Van Breda

March 13, 2014 at 2:41 PM

Bipolar in a Senryu nutshell-- well done !

Brian Cooper

March 13, 2014 at 2:57 PM

You are too kind Kim but thank you! Brian

Kira Price

March 12, 2014 at 10:22 PM

The ups and the downs I hear that. Nice Senryu

Brian Cooper

March 13, 2014 at 10:38 AM

Thank you Kira. It is very much appreciated. Have a good day! Brian

Larry Berdoo

March 12, 2014 at 12:06 PM

A roller coaster ride out of control, ups and downs, wreckless tail spins. Quick, I need another pill to chill the rage...... I find The Soup a great therapy. Thanks Brian, for sharring.

Brian Cooper

March 12, 2014 at 12:15 PM

Yes, the soup is a great outlet for sure. May Zen be your friend today. Brian

Poet Destroyer A

March 10, 2014 at 9:45 AM

Good morning Brian, first I want to tell you, I love your Avatar, one of the best symbols ever, up to this date. about the senryu. a theater we master, with the many faces we daily display. ps....I like how you matched your avatar to your poem. awesome, I've done the same in the past. :) have a great day. Linda

Poet Destroyer A

March 10, 2014 at 10:49 AM

thank you! I will make my day as productive as possible. Linda

Brian Cooper

March 10, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Good morning Linda, Thank you for reading and the kind comments. This the first I’ve tried and know it is not perfect in some way, but express’ my thoughts exactly. If one person likes it then it’s worth it. Thank you for making my day. I hope your day is productive a filled with your heart’s desires. Brian

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