Bipolar

BIPOLAR
Buoyant joyful spirits
but a garb, tormented
binary mind, prey to
betraying, grave  mood swings.
Brazeness doth  give way
brusquely to despondence;
blues to sadly,  hold sway.
Date Aug 16 2016
Name of contest 
PleiadesB

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/6/2016 7:20:00 AM
Sushma, I am bipolar, but live happy and healthy for 8 years now. My sister had it too and didn't do so well. You touched on a very difficult subject very well.. congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 9/6/2016 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, Laura. Fortunately, many respond well to timely treatment. Stay blessed!
Date: 8/20/2016 4:46:00 AM
You shed light on a very difficult disease to live with, both from the person who suffers from it to the loved ones who must deal with it. I can relate and you did well describing it. Congratulations on your win! : ) 7
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/20/2016 4:51:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for your complimentary words. I am an orthodontist so related to the medical world. Maybe that helped in portraying the condition.
Date: 8/19/2016 8:28:00 PM
Sushi, congrats on your fine win! An excellent portrait of Bi-polar disease. Great work! Blessings!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/20/2016 4:58:00 AM
Please do not bother about misspelling my name. It happens with all of us many a times when our computer/ smartphone insists on outsmarting us!!
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/19/2016 10:46:00 PM
Thanks a lot!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/19/2016 8:30:00 PM
Sushma, my tablet has a mind of its own. I spelled your name correctly in my first comment but the tablet changed it. I'm so sorry.
Date: 8/16/2016 4:18:00 AM
Great description of bipolar in such a tough form, Sushma:)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/16/2016 4:43:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 8/15/2016 11:42:00 PM
nice write Sushma, good luck in the contest
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 8/16/2016 12:21:00 AM
Thank you.
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