Sushma A. Singh Poet Verse

Bipolar

BIPOLAR
Buoyant joyful spirits
but a garb, tormented
binary mind, prey to
betraying, grave  mood swings.
Brazeness doth  give way
brusquely to despondence;
blues to sadly,  hold sway.
Date Aug 16 2016
Name of contest 
PleiadesB

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Beautiful Scars September 6, 2016 at 7:20 AM Sushma, I am bipolar, but live happy and healthy for 8 years now. My sister had it too and didn't do so well. You touched on a very difficult subject very well.. congrats on your placement! :)-luloo Sushma A. Singh September 6, 2016 at 10:09 AM Thank you, Laura. Fortunately, many respond well to timely treatment. Stay blessed!

Connie Marcum Wong August 20, 2016 at 4:46 AM You shed light on a very difficult disease to live with, both from the person who suffers from it to the loved ones who must deal with it. I can relate and you did well describing it. Congratulations on your win! : ) 7 Sushma A. Singh August 20, 2016 at 4:51 AM Thank you, Connie for your complimentary words. I am an orthodontist so related to the medical world. Maybe that helped in portraying the condition.

Kim Merryman August 19, 2016 at 8:28 PM Sushi, congrats on your fine win! An excellent portrait of Bi-polar disease. Great work! Blessings! Sushma A. Singh August 20, 2016 at 4:58 AM Please do not bother about misspelling my name. It happens with all of us many a times when our computer/ smartphone insists on outsmarting us!! Sushma A. Singh August 19, 2016 at 10:46 PM Thanks a lot! Kim Merryman August 19, 2016 at 8:30 PM Sushma, my tablet has a mind of its own. I spelled your name correctly in my first comment but the tablet changed it. I'm so sorry.

Joanna Daniel August 16, 2016 at 4:18 AM Great description of bipolar in such a tough form, Sushma:) Sushma A. Singh August 16, 2016 at 4:43 AM Thanks.

Lewis Raynes August 15, 2016 at 11:42 PM nice write Sushma, good luck in the contest Sushma A. Singh August 16, 2016 at 12:21 AM Thank you.