Notes About The Poem

Just realized I had rhymed the whole thing, so i had to go through and make sure the lines did not rhyme for "blank verse." Good grief!

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Binge

I often binge on things, but not bad things.
I like good movies or good TV shows.
I choose to binge on things that me glad.
Ten hours straight through is not too long for me!

I’ll binge on drama series and won’t stop
until I’m nodding off. I only need
a weekend of free time. I like to sit!
I also binge on reading lovely books.

I used to binge on shopping for good deals.
I’d go to thrift shops finding things like tops
or purses, dresses, pants, or nice high heels.
Great bargains make me do a happy dance!

I rarely hunt for used things any more.
Some things I wear today are vintage clothes.
My spouse would love to throw them out the door!
But things I love – I just can’t part with those.

I binge on writing poetry sometimes
although I do not write that way too much.
But once I wrote ten poems all in rhyme
and did all of those poems in one day.

I used to binge on exercise when I
was teaching classes at the local gym.
But problems make that difficult these days.
I sure do miss the days I had more zeal!

Because I cannot exercise as much
as I once did, on food I have not binged
the way I used to, and I must not eat
potato chips, for I can't eat just one!

One final thing which I love binging on
would be the precious friendships I have formed.
With sisters and dear friends, there’s plenty of
my time to binge on them! Love never ends.

March 13, 2023 
for Sotto Poet's B--Forms And Words Poetry Contest
For Blank Verse which uses iambic pentameter of unrhymed lines
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Goldsmith Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a wonderful write/story. I can see myself in it. Enjoy your win with blessings................
Poet Avatar
April 2, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is poetically written with rhythm.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:36 PM
Andrea, I’ve done that before…written a poem and realized it wasn’t with the correct form and then spend time fixing it. I love that you binge on friendships. I’m having my tooth pulled tomorrow so today I was binging on pringles…lol. I need to knock that of. Enjoyed, my friend!
Daniel Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:35 AM
You sure are very frank here, Andrea:)
Turner Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 7:27 AM
A poem everyone can relate to, Andrea. I binge on jelly beans. A fun read. Have a super day, girl.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 4:42 AM
- A great and fun poem, Andrea :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 3:06 AM
You're a great poet. Hugs.
Rolland Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 1:26 AM
this is quite touching, thanks a lot or sharing these " binge" ?, i had another idea in my mind, this is a delicieous reading, have a nice day yann
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