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Binded By Walls

I hate how I have not seen the beauty of your face, And still this day no sunshine has seen my eyes. For now I know not what the day has done for me yet, For the two most beautiful things I still have not met.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2010 8:59:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Btrendan. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/4/2010 1:30:00 PM

Very awsome and intigruing write, Brendan

Chuck Keys

Date: 10/4/2010 10:10:00 AM

i like your style ... suggestive just a little, but emotionally provoking. thank you, chuck

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/4/2010 8:33:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today ..hope u will check out the contest scene to enter and good luck with luv...