Binary

binary stars
he comes sometimes
and vanishes
suddenly into deep space
to orbit me once more
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Warrior Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 9:17 AM
A SuperNova of a write...you are a new star in the making...they may be a supernova coming to its end...may the Angels take you to higher realms...welcome aboard...god bless...(:^WW^:)
Beaufort Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Sounds like you have feelings for someone, but they are not always there for you. We know a lot of people like that. Makes it tough on ones heart. The world is a beautiful place, but chemistry does such strange things to us. Welcome to this bit of heaven. It presents a chance to get inside the heads of some of us. I find that it adds art to life. There are some wonderful people here. Again, welcome.
A  Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:55 PM
Laura, a lovely poem. SKAT
Matthews Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:20 AM
Short and sweet
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