Binary

binary stars he comes sometimes and vanishes suddenly into deep space to orbit me once more

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Winged Warrior

Date: 3/20/2016 9:17:00 AM

A SuperNova of a write...you are a new star in the making...they may be a supernova coming to its end...may the Angels take you to higher realms...welcome aboard...god bless...(:^WW^:)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/19/2016 3:22:00 PM

Sounds like you have feelings for someone, but they are not always there for you. We know a lot of people like that. Makes it tough on ones heart. The world is a beautiful place, but chemistry does such strange things to us. Welcome to this bit of heaven. It presents a chance to get inside the heads of some of us. I find that it adds art to life. There are some wonderful people here. Again, welcome.

Skat A

Date: 3/18/2016 11:55:00 PM

Laura, a lovely poem. SKAT

Jasper Matthews

Date: 3/17/2016 11:20:00 AM

Short and sweet