Bin Or Keeper

When I put pen to paper 
words take on some meaning
as they drop from my pen

A life of their own
they begin to form
as sentences are made

Each portrays a thought
showing often more than meant
revealing deep hidden feelings

As the sentences spring to life
verses start to be formed
telling a certain tale

Sometimes of joy, others of woe
when at last I lie my pen aside
blank paper there is no more

A new poem comes to life
Sitting back I read afresh
will it be bin or a keeper?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lamoureux Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 11:57 AM
Hi Shadow, soup mail.
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October 21, 2013 at 10:44 AM
Good one, I know the feeling. My loving Miss Gray poem was one of those that I considered puting in the bin but with a bit of work it became a keeper.
Mehta Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:58 PM
Ye3s, I agree with Carrie, Shadow
Guzzi Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 9:33 PM
well us a notebook and todays bin may turn into tomorrows keeper! Thanks for stopping by my verses and commenting! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Such poetry introspection......it is true with me also......the words take a life of their own, almost without my control. I think many poets would agree!
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:43 PM
hi Carrie yes you start with a thought and as you write it becomes transformed in something quite different lol Ty Shadow x smile
Andresen Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:08 PM
- Thoughts flying, words are written ... a poem on paper .... well done Shadow. - I put down some thoughts on paper today .... read it if you would like - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 2:17 PM
hi Anne Lise I have just read your very wise poem Ty for reading mine Shadow x smile
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