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Billy Brooks

Billy Brooks bought brother Bobby a beautiful big blue bike. The big blue bike was the best buy that Billy Brooks ever bought! Written for tongue twister contest!

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/9/2011 2:29:00 PM

You can list your form as alliteration! HUGS! I see you are not trying free verse at all, why not try? Light & Love

John Freeman

Date: 3/8/2010 6:52:00 AM

Ralph, Congratulations on this poem's success in contest. Sincere, Agape, Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/8/2010 1:16:00 AM

Ralph, You are in the winner's circle with this tongue twister. Congratulations! Smiles, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/7/2010 8:58:00 PM

Congrats Ralph on your winning poem and placement in the Tongue Twisters contest.. a neat fun write and wonderful win to enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Susan Palli

Date: 3/6/2010 12:12:00 PM

Good one! Susan