Billy Brooks

Billy Brooks bought brother Bobby a beautiful big blue bike.
The big blue bike was the best buy that Billy Brooks ever
bought!


Written for tongue twister contest!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
February 9, 2011 at 2:29 PM
You can list your form as alliteration! HUGS! I see you are not trying free verse at all, why not try? Light & Love
Freeman Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 6:52 AM
Ralph, Congratulations on this poem's success in contest. Sincere, Agape, Moses
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 8, 2010 at 1:16 AM
Ralph, You are in the winner's circle with this tongue twister. Congratulations! Smiles, Dane Ann
Sweetheart Avatar
March 7, 2010 at 8:58 PM
Congrats Ralph on your winning poem and placement in the Tongue Twisters contest.. a neat fun write and wonderful win to enjoy.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Palli Avatar
March 6, 2010 at 12:12 PM
Good one! Susan
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