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Bill's Thrilled Still

There once was a fellow named Bill Who lived up on top of a hill A low flying plane Carved a groove in his brain Apparently Bill is of two minds still

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Date: 8/11/2023 11:17:00 AM
....aha....bill never saw the unknown before.....so now, like most, his world be split.......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/11/2023 1:54:00 PM
Bill is of two minds now.. can't choose between each! Some people are like that... not us though!
Date: 8/11/2023 9:42:00 AM
One side of Bill’s brain has remained the same - The other side is driving him insane - It’s giving him thoughts - Of indecent sorts - And he can’t even remember her name…… Belle
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Jack Ellison
Date: 8/11/2023 1:57:00 PM
Happens to me often... Jack

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