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Bills Fan

nail clippings Buffalo in the snow Damar looks on in angst his heart stops field glazed white same as eyes Bill’s demise 1/23/2023 Tricube form Not for contest

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 1/28/2023 2:07:00 PM

I like the rhyme (since it is non-contest, anyway). Very current, short and sweet and simple. Can't beat that for a tricube.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2023 5:04:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2023 6:35:00 PM

Will Buffalo ever win the Super Bowl?! Poor Bills. Ever the bridesmaid, never the bride.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:19:00 AM

Right?! Many fans think…just once before I die…lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/24/2023 3:24:00 PM

Well done in this new form my friend, I found inspiration in the opening lines. Best wishes to you.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 4:52:00 PM

Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/24/2023 2:44:00 AM

I should love this form but have no ideas. Rather a sad ending. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 7:37:00 AM

Yes, my team lost so No Super bowl this year. Damar, a player, on a previous game was hit in his chest and brought back from the dead. Most players if not all joined in prayer on the football field. A crazy year for the Buffalo Bills! Buffalo is in Western New York.