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Bills Fan

nail clippings
Buffalo
in the snow

Damar looks
on in angst
his heart stops

field glazed white
same as eyes
Bill’s demise

1/23/2023
Tricube form
Not for contest

sportsverse

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Reason A. Poteet

January 28, 2023 at 2:07 PM

I like the rhyme (since it is non-contest, anyway). Very current, short and sweet and simple. Can't beat that for a tricube.

Kim Rodrigues

January 28, 2023 at 5:04 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Gershon Wolf

January 26, 2023 at 6:35 PM

Will Buffalo ever win the Super Bowl?! Poor Bills. Ever the bridesmaid, never the bride.

Kim Rodrigues

January 27, 2023 at 5:19 AM

Right?! Many fans think…just once before I die…lol

Sotto Poet

January 24, 2023 at 3:24 PM

Well done in this new form my friend, I found inspiration in the opening lines. Best wishes to you.

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2023 at 4:52 PM

Thank you :)

Victor Buhagiar

January 24, 2023 at 2:44 AM

I should love this form but have no ideas. Rather a sad ending. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

January 24, 2023 at 7:37 AM

Yes, my team lost so No Super bowl this year. Damar, a player, on a previous game was hit in his chest and brought back from the dead. Most players if not all joined in prayer on the football field. A crazy year for the Buffalo Bills! Buffalo is in Western New York.

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