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For: A Literary Character Clerihew Poerty Contest 

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

January 6, 2026Rivendell on

Bilbo Baggins

One hundred and eleven Bilbo Baggins
Threw a party then packed his spraggins*
Went to live amongst the Elvin**
In Rivendell he found heaven


*Spraggins: man with the creaking legs.
legs
**“The Fellowship of the Ring”, Book #1 “The Lord of the Rings Trilogy”, JRR Tolkien
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Goldsmith Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:10 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "Bilbo Baggins" write again. Have a blessed day with your win................
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 2:56 PM
Cute character you chose. I never heard of the word spraggins (as described in your notes) so I didn't understand how it would be used in the context in which you used it. But I enjoyed your clever take of him packing up and going to live with the elvin. I remember reading the entire trilogy in high school. I could not put it down and I thought to myself back in '73 what a great movie it would make. Then later they made the movies!! Congrats in my contest.
Achara Avatar
January 15, 2026 at 8:35 AM
Andrea, I favor Science Fiction over fantasy. I recently read “Project Hail Mary” by Andy Weir. it is a fantastic book. It is being made into a movie.
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 3:31 PM
what other books are your favorites? Did you ever read a Handmaid's Tale? I love stuff like that.
Dietrich Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 3:30 PM
Hmmm, that would make sense. i found different meanings for spraggins when I googled it but not creaking legs. Maybe this is a thing in England that I don't know about.
Achara Avatar
January 13, 2026 at 3:02 PM
That you. Bilbo was elderly and I presumed he had creaking legal, so in essence he metaphorically packed his creaking legs and moved to Rivendell.
Peranteau Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 4:43 PM
now, show'n me awesome art az such; you'll surely change mine poetic muse....no, I won't look...it iz awesome, exspecially thuh house all tuck'd in so comfortably...oh...your write...I never read thoze books, yet, have wild imagine uv such folklore...certainly, you've found so in sum mine writes..hmm...Thanx fer thuh read dear poet...much love
Achara Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 10:12 PM
JRR Tolkien wrote and illustrated the books. I definitely recommend reading the books before watching the movies. Tolkien was a power house in literature. I do appreciate your poems. They are a delightful challenge to read.
Goldsmith Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 1:37 PM
Your "Bilbo Baggins" is a fun read. What a great picture. I have Not read this. "Good Luck" I did "David Davy Crockett." Have a fun day writing away..........
Achara Avatar
January 7, 2026 at 1:42 PM
Thank you. I read all of the Hobbit books in high school, many decades ago. Good luck to you too!
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