Bikini Clad Beauty

Summertime beauty Her figure is a delight Perfection of curve http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love3.php

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Raul Moreno

Date: 9/1/2009 1:58:00 AM

Nice work James, love the last line...Raul

Katherine Stella

Date: 8/29/2009 5:57:00 AM

ruben cracked me up lol that would be definity a sight for sore eyes lol another great write with fantastic imagery my friend keep em coming enjoyed I use imagination just turned it around as a guy losing trunks lol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/20/2009 5:27:00 AM

Nice Haiku, James. Enjoy your time at the beach wherever it will be. And thanks for your comment, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/20/2009 2:15:00 AM

Lovely haiku, James! Sorry I haven't had more time to write. Obviously, I couldn't sleep this night. Keep thinking of the eagle and the dove hovering over the "summertime beauty." Love you, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/19/2009 4:59:00 AM

I missed reading so many extremely outstanding poems yesterday. I hope to get them read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us James. Love, Carol

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/19/2009 4:29:00 AM

good haiku fraser--charma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/18/2009 1:23:00 PM

Very descriptive Haiku. I'll have to look at the picture. Keep writing. Sara