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For Brian Strand's No 1277 Poetry Contest

Bike Ride

I like
my bike.

Riding, 
gliding, 

I view
sky blue

and see
grand tree.

Morn yields
corn fields -

Pasture
rapture;

Farm ploughs;
calm cows

lazing . . .
grazing

on grass
gone past.

Slow roam.
Go home.

youthfootle

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Linda Alice Fowler

January 23, 2024 at 12:56 PM

Suhweet! Nice ones. :)

Joe Maverick

January 23, 2024 at 3:58 AM

Slow-mo great poe.' From borderline to fine rhyme.' Hi there.!

Susan Ashley

January 22, 2024 at 5:47 PM

Ah, your footles are the best! I adore them all but I especially enjoyed "Pasture rapture" and Farm ploughs; calm cows". A wonderful "bike ride", dear Andrea. Your vivid poem brought me there. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2024 at 5:00 PM

thanks so much

Duke Beaufort

January 22, 2024 at 4:12 PM

It's a nice country ride and a pleasure to go along with you on it! TY!!

Arlo Parker

January 22, 2024 at 3:42 PM

The best; Pass test...... Footle troubadour par excellence!

Ink Empress

January 22, 2024 at 7:21 AM

I love that last one the most. Your footles are the best! I love reading them, congrats on your win too in brians contest. Pleasure reading your work and seeing your work in winners list

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2024 at 9:55 AM

Thanks, Ink

Sara Kendrick

January 22, 2024 at 4:38 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2024 at 9:55 AM

Thanks, Sara

Howard Kerr

January 22, 2024 at 1:37 AM

Well done, Andrea. Congratulations on your premiere placement. Your sequence of footles is imaginative, insightful and inventive. It sustains interest throughout. Howard

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2024 at 9:56 AM

Thanks so much, Howard

Hiya Sharma

January 21, 2024 at 8:12 PM

Oh this is so captivating, I could almost envision myself, riding the bike along with you & seeing those vivid scenes.. A fun footle, but I especially love this how you've conveyed such impeccable imagery within few words, it's tricky to do, but you've really nailed it! A beautiful write dear Andrea, love this.. Keep writing & shining, sending many best wishes for the contest too :)

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2024 at 9:56 AM

You are too sweet, dear Hiya