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Bike Ride

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For Brian Strand's No 1277 Poetry Contest

I like my bike. Riding, gliding, I view sky blue and see grand tree. Morn yields corn fields - Pasture rapture; Farm ploughs; calm cows lazing . . . grazing on grass gone past. Slow roam. Go home.

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/23/2024 12:56:00 PM

Suhweet! Nice ones. :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/23/2024 3:58:00 AM

Slow-mo great poe.' From borderline to fine rhyme.' Hi there.!

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/22/2024 5:47:00 PM

Ah, your footles are the best! I adore them all but I especially enjoyed "Pasture rapture" and Farm ploughs; calm cows". A wonderful "bike ride", dear Andrea. Your vivid poem brought me there. Congratulations for your excellent win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2024 5:00:00 PM

thanks so much

Duke Beaufort

Date: 1/22/2024 4:12:00 PM

It's a nice country ride and a pleasure to go along with you on it! TY!!

Arlo Parker

Date: 1/22/2024 3:42:00 PM

The best; Pass test...... Footle troubadour par excellence!

Ink Empress

Date: 1/22/2024 7:21:00 AM

I love that last one the most. Your footles are the best! I love reading them, congrats on your win too in brians contest. Pleasure reading your work and seeing your work in winners list

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2024 9:55:00 AM

Thanks, Ink

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/22/2024 4:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2024 9:55:00 AM

Thanks, Sara

Howard Kerr

Date: 1/22/2024 1:37:00 AM

Well done, Andrea. Congratulations on your premiere placement. Your sequence of footles is imaginative, insightful and inventive. It sustains interest throughout. Howard

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2024 9:56:00 AM

Thanks so much, Howard

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 8:12:00 PM

Oh this is so captivating, I could almost envision myself, riding the bike along with you & seeing those vivid scenes.. A fun footle, but I especially love this how you've conveyed such impeccable imagery within few words, it's tricky to do, but you've really nailed it! A beautiful write dear Andrea, love this.. Keep writing & shining, sending many best wishes for the contest too :)

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/22/2024 9:56:00 AM

You are too sweet, dear Hiya