Jun-Jun Villanueva Poet Tetractys

Biggest Looser

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            Loose
                 Such pounds
                           Triumphant
                                  Light as feather
                  Calories - metabolated,perspired.
            Oppressive and tyrannous weight in arms
                    Manumitted
                            Light-weighted
                                  Looser
                                   Wins.



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Dr.Ram Mehta May 31, 2011 at 5:44 AM Beautiful write on lose of weight. Jun-jun. Please give once over to the form of Tetractys

Sarah Seraphin May 31, 2011 at 5:29 AM * “Smile * Nice Poetics Reflection Tis Seems Upon The Pain to Pleasure Involved Amid Diet * Excercise * Body * Health & Mind * Dear Beautiful Jun Jun. * Lightly Sweeet But Low Upon Calories Lovely Verse. * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Sarah” *