Christopher Flaherty Poet Free verse

Bigger Than the Empire State

Bigger than the Empire State 

Its a very big world out there 
Bigger than the empire state
Magnified by the problems man's mind doth create
If god was sat examining us on an old park bench
Carefully watching his creation
Every human nation
Do you think his face would mask any elation
Personally I think he would head for the nearest station
To take a lengthy vacation
So he could ponder over the state of the nation
Literal translation 
We human's are desecrating his finest creation

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 1, 2010 at 2:31 PM Man is the culprit and God is the Artist and once we get away from HIS plan for us and do our own thing so to speak.. this is the condition of it all.. very nicely written Chris.. luv your lines flowing one into the next maintaining the thought pattern... enjoyed my friend... on this happy Sunday...with luv..

Lisa Jones July 31, 2010 at 5:35 PM I would not blame him for taking a vacation but this is true we should be more responsible for taking care of and loving his creations;...