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Big Waves

Big waves the waves came in, went out when the rocking abated her heartbeat came back to normal soon,too, the glistening sun receded seashells and seaweed came, and went ashore but it was the big waves that came in, and went out starting as a ripple and curling at the end, crashing, that made her shout connie pachecho 2/5/17

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Date: 2/6/2017 12:22:00 AM
Can see, feel and hear them! Well done, Connie!
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Date: 2/5/2017 10:05:00 AM
A lovely description of the sea, Connie. If it's for the Beyond the Breakers contest, I wish you success.
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