Big Top Polka Dots

knabstrup starstruck a galloping galaxy polka dot ponies *Knabstrup Horse - Knabstrupper, a Danish breed of spotted horse often used in circuses for their striking coats. *haiku form with poetic license 01/18/19 For Edward Ibeh's Polka Dots Poetry Contest

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Gary Onderisin

Date: 2/17/2019 8:14:00 AM

Thanks for this succinct, intriguing write, Maureen. Your poetic instincts and works are outstanding. Peace, Gary P.S. Forgive me for accidentally deleting your feedback for my "Like those still waters"; I'm what one would call technically challenged.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/17/2019 8:33:00 AM

Thank you Gary, for your generous warm feedback, and for visiting my page. I have fat fingers on the touchscreen too ;) I will visit it again :) Have a lovely day! xomo

Anisha Dutta

Date: 2/2/2019 5:29:00 AM

A galloping poem on polka dots. Love.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 2/2/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you Anisha :) xomo!

Bernard Chan

Date: 1/29/2019 9:52:00 PM

Two thumbs, or four hooves, up!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 1/30/2019 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Bernard! I'm pleased with this one ;) xomo

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/25/2019 10:59:00 PM

A galloping galaxy of polka dot ponies, what more beautuful a vison could one wish for. I adore horses! Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 1/26/2019 8:01:00 AM

I know right! ;p Hugs & Giggles, thank you Jennifer, xomo!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/23/2019 11:10:00 PM

Hi Maureen, I love horses from a far. I hope to get enough nerve to actually ride one. Good one for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in contest:-) Alexis

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 1/25/2019 7:57:00 AM

Hi! :) I did some riding in my younger years, one of best feelings ever, especially catching air <3 but my little butt's been so broke the thought of a trot makes me wince ;) xomo