Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Poet Haiku

Big Top Polka Dots

knabstrup starstruck
                                     a galloping galaxy 

                                      polka dot ponies







*Knabstrup Horse - Knabstrupper, a Danish breed of spotted horse 
  often used in circuses for their striking coats.

*haiku form with poetic license

01/18/19

For Edward Ibeh's 
Polka Dots Poetry Contest

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Gary Onderisin February 17, 2019 at 8:14 AM Thanks for this succinct, intriguing write, Maureen. Your poetic instincts and works are outstanding. Peace, Gary P.S. Forgive me for accidentally deleting your feedback for my "Like those still waters"; I'm what one would call technically challenged. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 17, 2019 at 8:33 AM Thank you Gary, for your generous warm feedback, and for visiting my page. I have fat fingers on the touchscreen too ;) I will visit it again :) Have a lovely day! xomo

Anisha Dutta February 2, 2019 at 5:29 AM A galloping poem on polka dots. Love. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 2, 2019 at 7:24 AM Thank you Anisha :) xomo!

Bernard Chan January 29, 2019 at 9:52 PM Two thumbs, or four hooves, up! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 30, 2019 at 7:47 AM Thank you Bernard! I'm pleased with this one ;) xomo

Jennifer Proxenos January 25, 2019 at 10:59 PM A galloping galaxy of polka dot ponies, what more beautuful a vison could one wish for. I adore horses! Great write. Poetry hugs, Jennifer. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 26, 2019 at 8:01 AM I know right! ;p Hugs & Giggles, thank you Jennifer, xomo!

Alexis Y. January 23, 2019 at 11:10 PM Hi Maureen, I love horses from a far. I hope to get enough nerve to actually ride one. Good one for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in contest:-) Alexis Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 25, 2019 at 7:57 AM Hi! :) I did some riding in my younger years, one of best feelings ever, especially catching air <3 but my little butt's been so broke the thought of a trot makes me wince ;) xomo

Charles Messina January 21, 2019 at 8:15 AM Love horses :) Nice! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 21, 2019 at 8:34 AM Me too ;) Thank you Charles! xomo

Silent One January 19, 2019 at 8:32 AM Oooh... Nice one Mo Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:51 AM Merci mon ami :) xomo!

Paul Callus January 19, 2019 at 8:29 AM Lovely and creative, Maureen! gl in the contest. Regards // paul Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:50 AM Thank you Paul :)) xomo!

Jan Allison January 19, 2019 at 8:17 AM What a unique take on the contest theme:-) hugs Jan xx Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:49 AM Thank you Jan :) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner January 19, 2019 at 12:03 AM OMG - have to get me some polka dot ponies now! Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:32 AM Lol! I wish ;p xomo!

Heidi Sands January 18, 2019 at 5:33 PM What a fun poem to read today! :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:30 AM Thank you Heidi! Enchanté <3 xomo

Bette Bavington January 18, 2019 at 4:50 PM How exciting. Good luck in contest. Nicely done. Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:23 AM Thank you Bette! :)) xomo

P.S. Awtry January 18, 2019 at 4:27 PM Polka dot ponies in the circus!!! Love it :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:23 AM :))) Thank you! xomo

Charlie Smith January 18, 2019 at 4:16 PM Great, clever entry Maureen, best wishes... Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:22 AM Thank you Charlie :) xomo!

Mystic Rose Rose January 18, 2019 at 2:29 PM I love horses of all kinds but these sound spectacular, lovely entry Maureen gl in the contest Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 19, 2019 at 8:21 AM I love all kinds of horses too ;) Thank you Pixie! xomo

Chris Green January 18, 2019 at 1:59 PM Striking coats in a striking poem. :) Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart January 18, 2019 at 2:03 PM Thank you my friend! :) xomo <3