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Big Splash (Haiku)


tension on roof
weight of snow crashed through
floor with big splash

© Joseph, March 14, 2008
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This actually took place in a well known supermarket chain when I do grocery 
shopping. It was pretty scary!

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Adell Foster

September 20, 2008 at 6:02 PM

Hi Joseph, I hope that all is well with you my friend, this is a great write, I can envision it all with the minds eye... It gives one the shivers and I am truly not looking forward to the hazards of a bitter cold winter. Thank you for sharing the read :-) God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Joi Simms

September 8, 2008 at 3:59 PM

This is a funny one becasue each winter we all worry about the roof of the house, business, garage. I like this. Good haiku.

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