Big Red Rose

I bought my honey a big red rose
She took a big sniff right up the nose
And what did she see
A furious bumblebee 
Now her nose looks like a big red rose
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Smith Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 5:59 PM
Like your style. Suspect a sense of humour worth cultivating. Regards David in NZ
Mcguire Avatar
March 18, 2019 at 6:14 PM
Thanks david
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 12:50 PM
Hello Timothy McGuire, I would take look at the rose before I sniffed it,in order not to be stung. have a nice day my friend.
Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 5:49 PM
Thank you! You too Darlene. :)
Dhaka Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 3:23 AM
Hahaha! super cute :)
Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 5:50 PM
Thank you Aditi
Awtry Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 11:27 PM
Uh-oh! :)
Mcguire Avatar
March 14, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Right P.S.
Gauthier Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 5:39 PM
Really, Timothy! LOL
Mcguire Avatar
March 13, 2019 at 9:00 PM
It's the thought that counts! :)
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