Big Lemon Or Little Lime

Big Lemon or Little Lime

Whether my poem is big lemon or little lime
Good or bad hate taking any or much time
And will end up going far out of my way
To hear something you sadly had to say.

Design of my poems all may be devious
Comparing this one to and with the previous
Turns out being boring and time consuming
And likely overhead my next poem is looming.

Total number of tempting poems grows on and on
And when I write last one my life will be gone
No matter where any of them are left behind
Pronouns and articles are all easy to find.

James Thomas Horn, Retired Veteran and Poet
This is thanks to Terry Cooper's outstanding
analysis and proclivity whatever that means.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Makama Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:28 AM
Whats happening here James Horn? Is someone hating on your poems?
Horn Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 8:01 PM
Funom, I have to admit I have not been using enough articles and pronouns and was being criticized for it. It is all my fault and I am trying to learn by it. I am really glad and thankful that you are reading my poems. Jim Horn
Horn Avatar
May 11, 2015 at 5:30 AM
I don't blame you. I wouldn't either even though I wrote it. Andddd, I would never begin to try to rate it unless an insect and you want to try and Raid It. Jim Horn
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace