Big Hungry Love

hunger                 growinG                 B I G


   savory            sweet                 smells                              fill me


                my                 mouth                    devours                           you



**** Slightly Different ****


       hunger growing big
  savory sweet smells fill me
       your love delicious

  



    @      @
         \/




David Meade
12/10/2014
Live Generously
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Nance Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 6:34 PM
Aww too cute...I've missed your writes, almost a month...hope to see more soon so I'm going through your older writes...hugs
Sirak Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:14 PM
You always amaze me with only a few words.
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 4:27 PM
thanks for dubbing me Dancing Sunflower. That was so sweet.
Trifiatis Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Excellent Haiku dear, David! Celebration of the heart!
Devnath  Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 8:49 AM
What a lovely feeling of love worded nicely. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
Chircop Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 7:56 AM
Adorably cute,feeding our thoughts with sweetness..Charma
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 12, 2014 at 1:43 AM
What a beautiful quill Dave! I am floored by it. Very creative and deliciously sweet and very romantic my dear friend. Wish you a very Merry Christmas to you and your whole family. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 7:41 PM
David, don't change your writes they are very creative and brings the reader in to want to read more. 7 and very romantic Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and your family
Manassian Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 2:33 PM
I really liked this...Yummy...sweet! :) Good one!
Bear Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:36 AM
Hope your hunger is appeased Very different. Loved it Blessings Edith
Chakrabarty Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 9:09 AM
haha David you're different an well of pleasure...rajat
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2014 at 7:45 AM
Very cool!
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 9:01 PM
YUM!! Savory, David.
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