Big Hungry Love

hunger                 growinG                 B I G


   savory            sweet                 smells                              fill me


                my                 mouth                    devours                           you



**** Slightly Different ****


       hunger growing big
  savory sweet smells fill me
       your love delicious

  



    @      @
         \/




David Meade
12/10/2014
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 8/11/2015 6:34:00 PM
Aww too cute...I've missed your writes, almost a month...hope to see more soon so I'm going through your older writes...hugs
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Date: 12/17/2014 4:14:00 PM
You always amaze me with only a few words.
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Date: 12/12/2014 4:27:00 PM
thanks for dubbing me Dancing Sunflower. That was so sweet.
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Date: 12/12/2014 10:21:00 AM
Excellent Haiku dear, David! Celebration of the heart!
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Date: 12/12/2014 8:49:00 AM
What a lovely feeling of love worded nicely. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 12/12/2014 7:56:00 AM
Adorably cute,feeding our thoughts with sweetness..Charma
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Date: 12/12/2014 1:43:00 AM
What a beautiful quill Dave! I am floored by it. Very creative and deliciously sweet and very romantic my dear friend. Wish you a very Merry Christmas to you and your whole family. A 7 for you! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 12/11/2014 7:41:00 PM
David, don't change your writes they are very creative and brings the reader in to want to read more. 7 and very romantic Blessings and Merry Christmas to you and your family
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Date: 12/11/2014 2:33:00 PM
I really liked this...Yummy...sweet! :) Good one!
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:36:00 AM
Hope your hunger is appeased Very different. Loved it Blessings Edith
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Date: 12/11/2014 9:09:00 AM
haha David you're different an well of pleasure...rajat
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Date: 12/11/2014 7:45:00 AM
Very cool!
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Date: 12/10/2014 9:01:00 PM
YUM!! Savory, David.
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