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Entering the room I saw too late The colour of the air I winced in pain I didn't know I was walking on glass

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/17/2008 3:11:00 AM
Ouch! Your poem evoked a real image...Nice one...Earnestly,Sara...
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Date: 10/16/2008 10:46:00 AM
Ouch very vivid and painfull piece really felt this one excellent write Nigel Blessings Michael
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