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Big Fat Lies

I always was a fool for you Eating your lies with a silver spoon Now I’m on a diet But you still try it Gagging me with a new ruse

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Karen Deeks

Date: 9/26/2012 10:31:00 AM

Obviously short but absolutely hit the spot, i know this moment from stored times in my life... to respond to your previous write as far as the criteria was laid down on google, your write fitted perfectly.....love the middle english in here also, im a middle english fan....karen

Debbie Duncan

Date: 9/21/2012 5:10:00 PM

great the way it rhymes & flows,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 6/29/2012 12:23:00 AM

lol...this is great. Enjoyed this witty write!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/26/2012 7:10:00 AM

I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you B.E. Susan. Love and blessings, Carol

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/22/2012 7:21:00 AM

Where have I been when you've been writing all these gems? love it, Kathy

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2012 3:28:00 PM

Great way to present the topic of one who is a is either a pathological liar or a complusive liar..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest...Sara