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Big Fat Lies

I always was a fool for you
Eating your lies with a silver spoon
Now I’m on a diet
But you still try it
Gagging me with a new ruse

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Karen Deeks

September 26, 2012 at 10:31 AM

Obviously short but absolutely hit the spot, i know this moment from stored times in my life... to respond to your previous write as far as the criteria was laid down on google, your write fitted perfectly.....love the middle english in here also, im a middle english fan....karen

Debbie Duncan

September 21, 2012 at 5:10 PM

great the way it rhymes & flows,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

Jonas L. Rozario

June 29, 2012 at 12:23 AM

lol...this is great. Enjoyed this witty write!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 26, 2012 at 7:10 AM

I want to thank you so much for your kind words on my writings. I am so far behind on everything including my life away from PoetrySoup. So will you please forgive me if I am not right on top of my comments and thank you's. I am trying. It is a pleasure to read your poetry today as I leave you this thank you B.E. Susan. Love and blessings, Carol

Kathryn Collins

June 22, 2012 at 7:21 AM

Where have I been when you've been writing all these gems? love it, Kathy

Sara Kendrick

June 18, 2012 at 3:28 PM

Great way to present the topic of one who is a is either a pathological liar or a complusive liar..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for the honor of being in the winners' list in your contest...Sara