Big Fat Change

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Four seasons tickets Big fat change like dictator Wins Change takes no hostage. Take it or leave it Only big fat change won't change So What's it gonna be. * Inspired by: Mystic Rose

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/16/2016 1:46:00 AM

Quite witty, my friend. "Change takes no hostage" ... we are all changing, but in the midst of all, we have the option of growing and learning OR frowning and twiddling your thumbs. I think the former is the better option.

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/16/2016 7:26:00 AM

Thank U Tim. Have a wonderful day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2016 8:19:00 AM

- Well written, Iris - A great poem ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)