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Big Brown Bear

big strong furry brown
fishing for salmon with paws~
prancing through flowers   




Date Written: 4/12/2022

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Joseph May

April 20, 2022 at 12:00 PM

Dropping back with Congrats on your win Paula

Paula Goldsmith

April 20, 2022 at 12:47 PM

Thank You, for coming back with your congratulations. It is good to see you again. It is an honor to have this fun win. Have a Great/Blessed Day................

Andrea Dietrich

April 19, 2022 at 2:46 PM

I do recall this cute one. Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

April 20, 2022 at 8:03 AM

Thank You, for coming back with your congratulations. It is an honor to have this big brown bear win. Glad you like my cute bear write. Have a Great/Blessed Day................

Christuraj Alex

April 18, 2022 at 8:52 PM

"prancing through" - Beautiful phrase. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith

April 19, 2022 at 11:50 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this big brown bear win. Glad you like this write. Have a Great/Blessed Day................

Sam Kauffman

April 18, 2022 at 10:05 AM

Love the contrast of strength and whimsical grace Paula! Congratulations on your win! Sending you Easter season blessings!

Paula Goldsmith

April 19, 2022 at 11:49 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this big brown bear win. Glad you "Love the contrast of strength and whimsical" in this write. Hope you had a blessed Easter. Have a Great/Blessed Day................

Tania Kitchin

April 18, 2022 at 8:42 AM

Paula, congratulations on your winning placement with your sweet haiku, a cute last line!

Paula Goldsmith

April 19, 2022 at 11:48 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this big brown bear win. Glad you enjoyed this haiku write. Have a Great/Blessed Day................

Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2022 at 10:15 AM

oh what a cute twist at the end!

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:44 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed this bear write. Yes, prancing through flowers and then a nap in the flowers. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Paul Callus

April 16, 2022 at 6:53 AM

Your big brown bear seems to enjoy himself running around and eating 'al fresco', Paula! ~ Best regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:42 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my write. Yes, fishing then eating salmon for dinner. A nap in the flowers. What a life a bear has. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Victor Buhagiar

April 16, 2022 at 2:19 AM

They must have been very tasty. Well done.

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:41 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you enjoyed my bear write. Salmon for dinner. Let's eat. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 15, 2022 at 3:08 PM

I love this haiku, displaying different facets of a delightful brown bear. Well done, Paula! :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:40 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love my haiku brown bear write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Sotto Poet

April 15, 2022 at 1:41 PM

Paula, you've written a wonderful haiku. A lovely piece of writing as one waits for the fish to soar out of the water Paula

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:37 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my haiku bear write. let's go fishing with our paws. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Kim Rodrigues

April 15, 2022 at 11:02 AM

Oh so cute!

Paula Goldsmith

April 16, 2022 at 2:36 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my cute bear write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Mystic Rose Rose

April 13, 2022 at 2:31 PM

What a wonderful pet he would make Paula. I would build him a tent in my back yard. You seem to have a special connection to animal, I love that about you, have a blessed day dear friend, Thankyou for your kind visit :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 15, 2022 at 8:31 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my bear write. Yes, I should make a tent for the Black Bear in my yard. He would love that. I do love animals but "No" Black Bears are in my yard. This was just a fun write. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Heidi Sands

April 13, 2022 at 1:28 PM

This is a great poem Paula. I can see the salmon and the prancing made me happy. I think a bear came to one of the trees in my yard recently and scraped off a lot of bark. I see the Black Bear come through here in the summer :) this is a fave.

Paula Goldsmith

April 15, 2022 at 8:24 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad this bear write made you happy. WOW!!! I see a fav??? You made my day. Black Bear in your yard, I would love that. I know one needs to be careful they can hurt you. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Blessed Easter..............

Ann Foster

April 13, 2022 at 7:22 AM

prancing... i love that... Well written... very visual. Ann

Paula Goldsmith

April 13, 2022 at 8:38 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you love this fun write. Now filled with salmon, we will go prancing through the pretty flowers. Soon it will be nap time. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Easter......................

Joseph May

April 13, 2022 at 5:39 AM

Waiting for the salmon to fly out of the water, Lovely write Paula

Paula Goldsmith

April 13, 2022 at 8:22 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my fun bear write. Yes, flying salmon out of the water into the paws of my near. Now let'e eat. Have a Great/Blessed Day and Easter......................