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Big Brothers Gift

Again, I admire my new watch, Ticking ever constant, ever faithful, Reliable. Just like my brother. How to repay him, I wonder. We are a world apart In hobbies, so giving gifts Is a mystery to me. He never says what he wants. I Care I Search, I really do. No luck. Maybe my role is getting spoiled Like little brothers should, And my gift to him Is that he can spoil me anytime.

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Date: 10/11/2023 7:26:00 PM
As a big sister to my only sibling I can relate to this. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Date: 10/5/2023 12:55:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts about sibling love through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 10/4/2023 4:51:00 AM
Hi Jacob welcome to soup its a good place read other people's poem and they see your comments and read yours in return that's the way to get to know people Good luck here hugs Shadow
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Jacob Harrison
Date: 10/4/2023 7:50:00 AM
Thank you for the welcome, Shadow!

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