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Big Blue

Oh, big ocean blue below just like the big blue sky above.
Many amazing shades of blues you can see from near to far.
With white fluffy foam on the water below and white fluffy clouds above.
The changing big ocean blue and the changing blue in the big sky from dawn to dusk.
May I always see and enjoy the many amazing shades of blues from near to far.
What a sight you both are to see from dawn to dusk.
Oh, big ocean blue below just like the big blue sky above.


Date Written: 6/6/2019

1 Place   Your first poem on Poetry Soup Contest Judged: 8/24/2020     
Sponsored by: Silent One

Copyright © Paula Goldsmith | Year Posted 2019

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Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/25/2021 2:41:00 PM A nice first poem! Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/26/2021 8:50:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Harry Horsman Date: 1/24/2021 7:36:00 PM Love this your first posted here on soup. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/26/2021 8:49:00 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you love this one. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Line Gauthier Date: 8/24/2020 12:05:00 PM Beautiful tribute ~ how appropriate that your first posting is about appreciation and gratitude. Congrats on your one-year anniversary with PS ~ Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2020 12:15:00 PM Thank You, for reading, writing, your congratulations and your kind words. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/24/2020 3:53:00 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paula ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2020 8:07:00 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, that first poem post was very exciting. Have a great day with a hug.............

Silent One Date: 8/24/2020 3:39:00 AM For some reason, I thought you had been here a lot longer... A lovely first post.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2020 8:04:00 AM Thank You, for writing. It was an honor to have a win in this contest/showcase. I am glad I entered and glad you like it. It means a lot to me because it was the first one for soup. Have a great day.......................

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/10/2020 8:13:00 AM Blue perfection with this one. A great way to paint a picture on our minds. A belated welcome to the soup. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/10/2020 1:48:00 PM "Thank You" Glad you like this one from my early work. I am enjoying and learning from the Soup group. Have a wonderful day writing..........

Aju Mukhopadhyay Date: 8/29/2019 11:52:00 AM I have read this and few other poems by Paula Goldsmith. She writes innocent poems deeping herself in childhood or keeping herself under the open sky; her poems exude a frank simple beauty. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/24/2020 12:17:00 PM Thanks for reading and writing. Sorry, I somehow missed this from you. Enjoy your day.............

Paul Callus Date: 7/8/2019 3:38:00 PM I enjoyed the comparisons you elicit between the blue sky and ocean, Paula. Maybe not a sonnet, but lovely verse just the same. Hope you will find your stay @ Soup pleasantly rewarding. ~ Best regards // paul Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/8/2019 5:24:00 PM I am new to the Soup. It is fun and a learning experience. Thank You, for reading and writing back to me.

Susan Ashley Date: 7/5/2019 2:45:00 PM I truly appreciate the beauty of your lovely poem, Paula, as I love the ocean and sky in all their gorgeous shades of blue too and find immense inspiration in both. Wonderfully done. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/5/2019 3:11:00 PM Thank You, for reading and writing back about my poem. I am still learning all about the "Soup." I have enjoyed your writings. Again, Thanks, Paula

Lady Labyrinth Date: 7/3/2019 6:08:00 PM My favourite colour, in all shades. I love the Ocean, I equate it with Life, the sky is an open heart clear blue skies and stormy clouds defibrillating lightening ... ah, what secrets the sky conceals and reveals. Beautiful poem, got me visual, feeling and thinking. x Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/3/2019 6:36:00 PM I love the many shades of the peaceful blue. So thrilled to read, I got you visual, feeling and thinking. Guess that is what the Soup is all about.

Ann Foster Date: 7/1/2019 11:33:00 AM I feel like a seagull floating in the air above, loving all of it. Great job. Ann Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 7/1/2019 4:21:00 PM Enjoyed your note. I would love to be a seagull with you floating in the air above the big ocean blue.

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/7/2019 2:22:00 PM hello paula Goldsmith, you have the best of both views. Lucky you. Have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply Paula Goldsmith Date: 6/10/2019 12:56:00 PM "Thank You," for your note. This is all new to me. It would be great to get help from you or anyone who has been doing this for some time. All Help Is Greatly Appreciated. Have a wonderful day.........