Paula Goldsmith Poet Free verse

Big Blue

Oh, big ocean blue below just like the big blue sky above.
Many amazing shades of blues you can see from near to far.
With white fluffy foam on the water below and white fluffy clouds above.
The changing big ocean blue and the changing blue in the big sky from dawn to dusk.
May I always see and enjoy the many amazing shades of blues from near to far.
What a sight you both are to see from dawn to dusk.
Oh, big ocean blue below just like the big blue sky above.


Date Written: 6/6/2019

1 Place   Your first poem on Poetry Soup Contest Judged: 8/24/2020     
Sponsored by: Silent One

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Andrea Dietrich May 4, 2026 at 1:04 PM Checking out your first post. It was a first place with Silent One and it was about six years ago when you came here, so a very belated congrats to you. I love all the blues of nature

Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2021 at 2:41 PM A nice first poem! Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2021 at 8:50 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you like this write. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Harry Horsman January 24, 2021 at 7:36 PM Love this your first posted here on soup. Paula Goldsmith October 26, 2021 at 8:49 AM Thank You, for reading and for writing. Glad you love this one. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Line Gauthier August 24, 2020 at 12:05 PM Beautiful tribute ~ how appropriate that your first posting is about appreciation and gratitude. Congrats on your one-year anniversary with PS ~ Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 12:15 PM Thank You, for reading, writing, your congratulations and your kind words. Enjoy your day writing away...........

Anne-Lise Andresen August 24, 2020 at 3:53 AM - Congratulations on your win, Paula ... I remember how exciting it was to post my first poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 8:07 AM Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. Yes, that first poem post was very exciting. Have a great day with a hug.............

Silent One August 24, 2020 at 3:39 AM For some reason, I thought you had been here a lot longer... A lovely first post.. This was not really a contest, it was an opportunity to showcase your first poem and I am glad you entered. Thank you. Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 8:04 AM Thank You, for writing. It was an honor to have a win in this contest/showcase. I am glad I entered and glad you like it. It means a lot to me because it was the first one for soup. Have a great day.......................

Richard Lamoureux February 10, 2020 at 8:13 AM Blue perfection with this one. A great way to paint a picture on our minds. A belated welcome to the soup. Paula Goldsmith February 10, 2020 at 1:48 PM "Thank You" Glad you like this one from my early work. I am enjoying and learning from the Soup group. Have a wonderful day writing..........

Aju Mukhopadhyay August 29, 2019 at 11:52 AM I have read this and few other poems by Paula Goldsmith. She writes innocent poems deeping herself in childhood or keeping herself under the open sky; her poems exude a frank simple beauty. Paula Goldsmith August 24, 2020 at 12:17 PM Thanks for reading and writing. Sorry, I somehow missed this from you. Enjoy your day.............

Paul Callus July 8, 2019 at 3:38 PM I enjoyed the comparisons you elicit between the blue sky and ocean, Paula. Maybe not a sonnet, but lovely verse just the same. Hope you will find your stay @ Soup pleasantly rewarding. ~ Best regards // paul Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2019 at 5:24 PM I am new to the Soup. It is fun and a learning experience. Thank You, for reading and writing back to me.

Susan Ashley July 5, 2019 at 2:45 PM I truly appreciate the beauty of your lovely poem, Paula, as I love the ocean and sky in all their gorgeous shades of blue too and find immense inspiration in both. Wonderfully done. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Paula Goldsmith July 5, 2019 at 3:11 PM Thank You, for reading and writing back about my poem. I am still learning all about the "Soup." I have enjoyed your writings. Again, Thanks, Paula

Lady Labyrinth July 3, 2019 at 6:08 PM My favourite colour, in all shades. I love the Ocean, I equate it with Life, the sky is an open heart clear blue skies and stormy clouds defibrillating lightening ... ah, what secrets the sky conceals and reveals. Beautiful poem, got me visual, feeling and thinking. x Paula Goldsmith July 3, 2019 at 6:36 PM I love the many shades of the peaceful blue. So thrilled to read, I got you visual, feeling and thinking. Guess that is what the Soup is all about.

Ann Foster July 1, 2019 at 11:33 AM I feel like a seagull floating in the air above, loving all of it. Great job. Ann Paula Goldsmith July 1, 2019 at 4:21 PM Enjoyed your note. I would love to be a seagull with you floating in the air above the big ocean blue.

Darlene De Beaulieu June 7, 2019 at 2:22 PM hello paula Goldsmith, you have the best of both views. Lucky you. Have a nice day my friend. Paula Goldsmith June 10, 2019 at 12:56 PM "Thank You," for your note. This is all new to me. It would be great to get help from you or anyone who has been doing this for some time. All Help Is Greatly Appreciated. Have a wonderful day.........