Joseph May Poet Quatrain

Big Bang Theory

Science gives us theories of evolution
 As they try to explain away creation
 Bang!, and the universe was born
 Night brings the stars then fades into dawn

 But there is order in planets and stars
 Was that accidental?, or a theory too far
 Just one look around, just one glance
 To wonder if all this came about by chance?

 A theory of chance is one that seems doomed
 The seasons have spoken, spring brings the bloom
 If one questions creation proof must be shown
 Those who believe know God sits on the throne.
                                 --
 11-30-18

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Alexis Y. December 12, 2018 at 4:48 PM Hi Joseph, What a deep and thought provoking write. The Bang Theory doesn't make sense to me.Excellent job:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen December 3, 2018 at 1:09 AM - "The Big Bang" is the most recognized theory of the universe's origins, Joseph - But no one knows for sure what will happen to the universe in the future :) - Great written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi December 2, 2018 at 7:33 PM Nice poem ... as Vijay said, thought-provoking. For some believing is seeing, for others, seeing is believing.

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2018 at 6:01 PM Nice one, Joseph.

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2018 at 6:01 PM Nice one, Joseph.

Heidi Sands December 1, 2018 at 7:49 AM Great one Joseph. I agree with Vijay, thought provoking. :)

Vijay Pandit December 1, 2018 at 7:18 AM It's all amazing.. as you say ..when we look around us. Much is known, but so much more is yet to be discovered. Always good to question..after all it's still a theory. But plenty of room for both points of view to prevail. A thought provoking write, Joseph.

Brandy Nicole November 30, 2018 at 11:15 PM "As they try to explain away creation" TRY, being the key word here in this statement. Also, "AWAY" being the other key word. Humans cannot create what God has made, it doesn't matter how much technology you have. Mankind cannot form life from the dust of the ground, as it states in the Bible. God can and He did. I understand your thoughts completely Joseph, and I agree with you. So beautifully written. ~ Brandy

Sand Blown November 30, 2018 at 8:47 PM good write...however, scientific opinion means doing unbiased math