Barbara Gorelick Poet Couplet

Bid On My Love-Through the Years

First came your smile and then I learned to trust
that there was more between us than just pure lust


The years have passed and so has the lust
Now I know I was right in placing my trust

11/30/15

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Skat A December 16, 2015 at 12:47 AM BARBARA, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2015 at 6:43 PM this is a good one about maturing love, Barbara. Congrats. I really like how you did yours.

Alexis Y. December 14, 2015 at 10:23 AM Barbara, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis

James Inman December 14, 2015 at 9:48 AM Lovely Barbara.

Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 11:15 AM So wonderful when you find trust and love - great write Barbara good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Boygene Rabura November 30, 2015 at 11:01 AM short n straight