Bid On My Love

Bid on my love



  

Sobs sapless fragment of my thirsty soul,
as cravings of illusive heart condense to mole,

Intense passion inked into scroll of trust,
Bid on my love first to later escape disgust !




Written Dec 4th, 2015
For contest by Tammy Reams

Awarded HM
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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December 16, 2015 at 12:50 AM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT**
Gentry Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Congratulations! Very nice.
Dietrich Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 6:46 PM
good to see this one again on the winners' list. Congrats to you.
May Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Congrats on your win Dr Upma
Y. Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Dr. Upma, congrats on receiving an HM in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis
Cheema Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:20 AM
Congrats on your lovely bid, Upma!
Inman Avatar
December 14, 2015 at 10:03 AM
Lovely write.
Dietrich Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:34 PM
I enjoyed seeing this one tonight. Gosh, I hope I can think one up. it's getting too late!!
Nance Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:33 AM
very neat couplets! :)
Promise Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 9:32 PM
Nice write and thanks for sharing. Best wishes for the contest. RP
May Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 8:30 AM
Nicely penned Dr Upma...I love the first line...
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