Jan Allison Poet Couplet

Bid On My Love

In the auction of love my heart is the star lot
The gavel will go down as Cupid’s arrow hit the spot  

I fall on bended knee and offer you a diamond ring
Please accept it my beautiful Queen, and I’ll be your King


Contest: Bid on my love
Sponsor: Tammy Reams
11~27~15

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Dalia Shahein December 30, 2015 at 5:48 PM Spectacular write my dear and congrats on your great win hugs / / :) dalia Jan Allison December 30, 2015 at 5:50 PM Thanks Dalia:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A December 16, 2015 at 12:43 AM Jan, Congrats on your awesome Couplet win. Luv **SKAT** Jan Allison December 17, 2015 at 1:44 AM Many thanks Skat:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi December 15, 2015 at 7:27 AM Hi buddy. Congrats for your #3 placement in the contest! ;-) Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 7:38 AM Thanks Teddy:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Gentry December 14, 2015 at 6:41 PM Congratulations! Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 1:05 AM Thanks so much Susan:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars December 14, 2015 at 6:14 PM Congrats Jan...:) Jan Allison December 15, 2015 at 1:05 AM Thanks so much Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 14, 2015 at 10:21 AM beautiful write Jan :) love and hugs.. congrats on the win :)) Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thanks so much Remnants:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema December 14, 2015 at 10:07 AM Congrats on your placement, Queen of hearts! Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thanks so much Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y. December 14, 2015 at 9:50 AM Jan, congrats on your placement in the "bid on my love" contest:-) Alexis Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane December 14, 2015 at 9:49 AM Well done, Jan. Congratulations. Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thanks so much Lin:-) hugs Jan xx

James Inman December 14, 2015 at 8:51 AM Wonderful Jan, it fits the theme beautifully. Very romantic and interesting perspective. Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM Thanks James:-) hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight December 14, 2015 at 8:41 AM This is so lovely, Jan. Congratulations on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:16 PM Thanks so much Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 14, 2015 at 8:33 AM WAY TO GO. I am surprised I had not seen this one before, Jan. Big congrats for your win! Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:17 PM Thanks Andrea it is difficult to keep up with all the poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper December 14, 2015 at 7:40 AM Wow! Congratulations on your win, the diamond ring won it for me. Jan Allison December 14, 2015 at 12:14 PM Thanks so much for the good news Eve I must get round to viewing the other poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne November 28, 2015 at 8:07 AM Another winner. Fav. Jan Allison November 28, 2015 at 9:22 AM Ohhh Armand so lovely to see you I was in desparate need of cheering up and now I am smiling:-) hugs Jan xx

Abdul Malik Mandani November 27, 2015 at 6:10 PM Can I start the bid? A diamond ring + a week's vacation?! lol Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 6:11 PM Sounds lovely Abdul I could do with a week in the sun:-) :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith November 27, 2015 at 6:01 PM Very romantic Jan Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 6:05 PM Thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

David Mohn November 27, 2015 at 5:50 PM Off the charts on the chivalry and cute scale Jan :) Jan Allison November 27, 2015 at 5:51 PM aww thanks David I hope I have got the form and theme correct for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx