Bicycle Circus

Bicycle circus Stolen and broken Set to cause chagrin New bikes keep coming Wednesday, May 11, 2022

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Eve Roper

Date: 5/27/2022 10:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Robert , on your win in the Naani Form in Joseph May contest. Blessings my friend

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/25/2022 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Robert! Wonderful use of metaphor.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/25/2022 9:26:00 AM

"New bikes keep coming" - Wow! Hiding truths. Congratulations!

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 5/24/2022 5:45:00 AM

As long as the new bikes keep coming, you can't go far wrong. Congratulations on your winning placement

Joseph May

Date: 5/23/2022 1:32:00 PM

The bike snatchers always cause us chagrin, Congrats on your win Robert

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2022 1:04:00 PM

I remember how our tires always kept getting ruined as we rode bikes so often. Congrats on your win

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/23/2022 12:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your creative story. I bet the circus goes though many bikes. Have a blessed day with your win...............