Debbie Duncan Poet Dramatic Monologue

Bible Stories

You came down to us 
 From out of the mist

 You descended upon us
    We called you God

  We bowed down to you 
 You came from another time
  Realms from another time

  From the stairways to heaven
 You were sent to watch over us
  You became voyagers in time

 You could not resist the female form
   One day you descended upon us

  You mated with our females 
        And we liked it 

     We liked it so much 
   We gave birth to your babies

  And now I hear you returning 
  From off in the distant realms



I wrote in summer of  1994,,,,,,,,,,   Genesis and JOB, Book of Enoch. 6http://www.kingjamesbibleonline.org/Genesis-6-4/
There were giants in the earth in those days; and also after that, when the sons of God came in unto the daughters of men, and they bare [children ] ...

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Sheol Moribund June 17, 2013 at 11:24 AM Dear Debbie: Love your poem!!! I really liked " From the stairways to heaven You were sent to watch over us You became voyagers in time" Have a great day. Debbie Duncan June 17, 2013 at 3:59 PM Thank you Sheol ;}

Gwendolen Song February 25, 2013 at 7:39 PM Deb, I am just learning of this topic in the O.T. and will be back to read this one again as the mysteries are revealed...nice to see u writing from the Spirit. :) gwendolen Debbie Duncan February 25, 2013 at 11:33 PM Thank you Gwen ;}

Andrea Dietrich February 18, 2013 at 10:01 PM gypsy woman. OH YES, how could I ever forget THAT one. It was one of my all time favorites, Debbie!! Still waiting for a new poem from ya!!

Duke Beaufort February 17, 2013 at 4:03 PM And the mysticism you have created is a lot of fun.

Duke Beaufort February 17, 2013 at 4:02 PM Debbie, thanks for reading the valentine's day piece that I wrote. I was hoping you would see it. You know, I often hear what I believe in being challenged by people who say that "desire" has something evil associated with it. My response would be (a la your poem here), that "god" is on my/our side. Anyway, you (and your work) are very thought provoking, and I appreciate it that you leave comments. It means a lot to me. A big THANK-YOU! By the way, I try to understand the forces of nature.

Robert Johnson February 17, 2013 at 2:54 PM An interesting perspective from a female point of view. As history notes, it's in the quotes, what men would like to do. :) Debbie Duncan February 17, 2013 at 6:16 PM Thank you Robert ;}

Phyllis Babcock February 17, 2013 at 12:08 PM Interesting write taken from KJV-food for thought. love phyl

Daver Austin February 17, 2013 at 9:53 AM From another time and place - oh wooooooo. Interesting and very entertaining, Deb. Love, daver

Michelle Mac Donald February 16, 2013 at 5:41 PM Ah, this fits in so well with this time of the year and should follow us though, Debbie. You've been a grand thinker for a very long while, I'm happy to read some of your thoughts and notions.:) Love, Mikki

David Williams February 15, 2013 at 12:09 PM Debbie ,I like...David Debbie Duncan February 15, 2013 at 1:48 PM Thank you David ;}

Don Johnson February 15, 2013 at 12:56 AM Ah yes perhaps they died , but now n then a tall one thrives, perhaps from Mars they did arrive , when the ice age ended here, love it babe ....xox Debbie Duncan February 15, 2013 at 1:49 PM Hello Don ;}

Richard Lamoureux February 14, 2013 at 8:34 PM All of them were destroyed in the flood. Very interesting poem, I quite enjoyed it. Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 8:56 PM Thank you for reading Richard ;}

Sara Kendrick February 14, 2013 at 1:53 PM Interesting work that you have penned..I wonder did all those offsprings from the mix of those two die in the flood?..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by ..Your visit was so uplifting..Sara Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 2:28 PM Thank you Sara ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen February 14, 2013 at 11:33 AM A very well written poem, Debbie. - Thank you for always so kind and sweet in your comments, you always make me happy. --- Happy Valentines Day! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 2:33 PM Thank you Ann - Lise ;}

Duke Beaufort February 14, 2013 at 8:10 AM The comments you get from a piece like this are very interesting. It's always a pleasure to see a translation of something familiar. Thanks for this interpretation. It's food for thought. Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 2:43 PM Thank you Duke ;}

Andrea Dietrich February 13, 2013 at 2:45 PM what a very unusual depiction of that scripture. Very imaginative, Debbie!! is this the oldie you were telling me about?? I enjoyed reading this. Debbie Duncan February 14, 2013 at 11:03 AM Thank you Andrea .

Donna Jones February 13, 2013 at 12:00 PM Interesting write Debbie Debbie Duncan February 13, 2013 at 12:34 PM Thank you for reading Donna ;}