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Bhest Erez Jill

I love you Bhest Erez Jill
Believe me cause it's real
Everything I'll do
Just to grow old with you

I want you to know
To let it show
That I'm in love with you
And I won't let you go

I'm not easy to understand
But you always hold my hand
When I'm out of light
You make things seems so right

Be here with you forever
Say no goodbyes, never
Here I'll stay
And I will love you everyday

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 9:31:00 PM

Claudine Barquio, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 5:57:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Claudine - I choose your first sweet written poem - I like it !! - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Claudine Barquio
Date: 11/7/2014 1:53:00 AM

thank you, for the warm welcome :))