Brian Chung Poet Quatrain

Beyond the Yonder

What lies beyond?
Far over yonder,
What? You wonder,
And you ponder.

Is it lush like dreams?
A land esteemed?
Or arid and bleak,
Lacking even a creek?

Provisions you gather,
Prepare to wander,
Onwards you saunter,
Go forth and discover!


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Daver Austin August 27, 2016 at 8:49 PM Abstract impressionism would suit this interesting write. I like it. daver Brian Chung August 29, 2016 at 5:14 AM Thank you very much! Also, I feel it would go well with some of the work by Edward Hopper. Even though he is not a surrealist, his works feel very surreal to me in a subtle sort of way.

Probir Gupta August 17, 2016 at 5:49 AM Very nice ... Great pleasure from the very small poem ... Brian Chung August 29, 2016 at 5:14 AM Sorry for the late reply, Thank you for your praises.