Beyond the Veil of Spiritual Eyes

Beyond the Veil Of Spiritual Eyes The eye of the spirit pulls back the veil Revealing a trove of unseen trails Alabaster sands embrace rose colored water Golden fingers dote over its earthly daughter Elements are alive with healing in their wake Swells, breaking curls release life into the lake As the foliage rustles from the wind in their sails All is alive from the living waters, all else pales We are but a tiny rosebud struggling to birth Into a garden inhabiting an ever growing earth One drop from the water unseals the eyes Lifting life’s veil removing its clever disguise Carole Cookie Arnold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/3/2012 8:13:00 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best Carole. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/4/2011 2:45:00 PM
Congrats Carole, on the win with this flowing piece..
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Date: 3/2/2011 2:34:00 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Rick, Carole
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Date: 3/2/2011 10:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carole, in ^Rick's contest "Spirit Eye". Love, Carol
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Date: 3/2/2011 9:40:00 AM
Simply beautiful, very nice to meet you! Congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:34:00 AM
Beautiful, Carole, Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Lainie
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Date: 3/2/2011 8:09:00 AM
This is wonderful....that last stanza is such a wonderful metaphor...love it!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 3/2/2011 4:53:00 AM
Congrats Cookie on your marvelous win in the spirit eye contest with this stunning entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten victory with luv..
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Date: 3/1/2011 5:48:00 PM
great win Carole,, many warm congratulations.
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:01:00 AM
Nice expressions with good images on Beyond the veil, Carole
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