Beyond the Veil of Spiritual Eyes

Beyond the Veil Of Spiritual Eyes The eye of the spirit pulls back the veil Revealing a trove of unseen trails Alabaster sands embrace rose colored water Golden fingers dote over its earthly daughter Elements are alive with healing in their wake Swells, breaking curls release life into the lake As the foliage rustles from the wind in their sails All is alive from the living waters, all else pales We are but a tiny rosebud struggling to birth Into a garden inhabiting an ever growing earth One drop from the water unseals the eyes Lifting life’s veil removing its clever disguise Carole Cookie Arnold
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Brown Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Congrats on making it through the 1st round of PoetrySoup International Contest X 2. Wishing you the best Carole. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
July 4, 2011 at 2:45 PM
Congrats Carole, on the win with this flowing piece..
Mehta Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 2:34 PM
Congratulations on the fourth place win in the contest of Rick, Carole
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 10:19 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carole, in ^Rick's contest "Spirit Eye". Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Simply beautiful, very nice to meet you! Congrad's on your fine win. Light & Love
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March 2, 2011 at 8:34 AM
Beautiful, Carole, Many congrat's on your BIG WIN, Lainie
Richards Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 8:09 AM
This is wonderful....that last stanza is such a wonderful metaphor...love it!! Congratulations!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 2, 2011 at 4:53 AM
Congrats Cookie on your marvelous win in the spirit eye contest with this stunning entry luv.. enjoy your sweet success and top ten victory with luv..
Maverick Avatar
March 1, 2011 at 5:48 PM
great win Carole,, many warm congratulations.
Mehta Avatar
February 16, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Nice expressions with good images on Beyond the veil, Carole
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