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Beyond the Trees - Rondelet

Grass waves in trembles, all alone Beyond the trees Long shadows creep from twilight's throne Beyond the trees Where sun takes leave and stars are honed Nay a whisper, nor farewell tone Beyond the trees _______________________ For Deb's Contest:

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Donna Jones

Date: 7/21/2013 5:45:00 PM

Loving long shadows creep....congratulations.... well done...

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 7/12/2013 6:04:00 PM

Carrie I so enjoyed this poem. Congrats on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/12/2013 10:54:00 AM

a beautiful rondelet AND for the tree contest, I enjoyed seeing this one on the list.

Skat A

Date: 7/11/2013 10:57:00 PM

congrats on your awesome win............. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2013 10:17:00 PM

Carrie.. Congratulations, thank you ever so much... I was very happy with all the poems entered in my TREE contest :-). Please enjoy my blog, I sure did... LOL--- always~ Linda

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/26/2012 8:55:00 AM

Poor grass...out there all alone...just waving...loaded with strong scenes of my favorite setting--outdoors. Then u leave me wondering the magnificence of Twilight's throne...unimaginable beauty! gwendolen :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/24/2012 11:11:00 AM

Merry Christmas to you and your family Carrie. Thinking of you. Have a wonderful new year. hugs phyl

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/20/2012 7:32:00 AM

congrats on this superb winner Carrie, have a wonderful festive season...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/19/2012 10:09:00 PM

Carrie, congratulations with your awesome win in Debbie's "Rondelets OR Simply 7 lines" contest... always~ pd

Isaiah Zerbst

Date: 12/15/2012 11:41:00 AM

This one creates a distinctive mysterious feeling. Though short, it has some powerful imagery that you should be proud of. I am glad this did well for you in the contest. Have a merry Christmas!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/15/2012 5:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Carrie love xx

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2012 3:13:00 PM

Though this is a short form I really like it! I guess it's because I am a sucker for repitition! And you used it so effectively creating mystery..I saw one of those black cut paper scenes in my mind...congrad's on your fine write winning. Light & Love

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/14/2012 9:09:00 AM

Best of luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2012 11:02:00 PM

I love your entry, Carrie. Hope it's at the top of the list!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/13/2012 9:49:00 PM

Simply beautiful.