Brandy Nicole Poet Rhyme

Beyond the Surface

With intent:
         You search “Beyond the Surface” of my existence
  desiring to know all that is me (to completely connect)
                                                           so deeply

                       The Blueprint of my Reality,
                          is within your presence!!


       What is Invisible has become Visible


            With caution:
       I allow this transformation- this connection
                                   as you Map out my World
              (you hold the information)  my truth
                     

       With intent:
             You search “Beyond the Surface” of my existence 
                     I am Visible within your Presence!!



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~ Just a little Scribble ~

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Running Wolves January 1, 2020 at 8:34 PM Beyond the surface true beauty reigns... Within the heart and soul which claims... No ownership that causes pain... A freely giving, loving soul... Knows no fear and stands so bold... And mends the heart and makes us whole... Brandy Nicole January 1, 2020 at 8:53 PM Your comment is so poetic. :) Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. Beyond the Surface you will find me. All that is me. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Richard Lamoureux October 15, 2019 at 7:21 AM This is quite beautifully expressed. Hugs Rick. Brandy Nicole October 15, 2019 at 1:49 PM Thank you Rick!! What is visible, will remain visible- unless there is a need to cover, or stay hidden. You and your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

John Hamilton May 23, 2019 at 3:32 PM I dare to differ Brandy, this is no mere scribble, this is poetic brilliance, short succinct, and packed with insight! Brandy Nicole May 23, 2019 at 7:13 PM Thank you John. Your thoughts truly humble me. In my eyes I see a simple scribble, while others see more. I am just me. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. May 19, 2019 at 10:47 PM Beautifully done. Brandy Nicole May 20, 2019 at 12:01 PM Thank you Allen. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior May 13, 2019 at 4:12 PM You are a simulation within my existence... I have your blueprints, ready to construct to become reality lol...your poetry is beyond the realms of poetic resonance...happy surfacing Brandy!...lots of poetic love...^WW^ Brandy Nicole May 13, 2019 at 7:30 PM :) Soft smile. Thank you my Warrior with Wings. I have become Visible- beyond words. Beyond the Surface of Poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Love and Light. ~ Brandy

William Kelii Kekaula May 12, 2019 at 9:54 PM Worthy for a Hollywood script, 'twas nice rendering! Aloha wk Brandy Nicole May 13, 2019 at 1:49 PM My words, worthy for a Hollywood script? I don't know what to say. I am humbled by your generosity. I am just a simple writer. Thank you William. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Kim Rodrigues May 10, 2019 at 7:00 PM The magic of oneness, to let that special someone see some of your soul. Nicely said. Brandy Nicole May 10, 2019 at 11:11 PM Thank you Kim. Such a beautiful thing to say. Your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Charles Messina May 10, 2019 at 8:33 AM Perfectly written Brandy, your poetry is always stunning and as beautiful as your soul is. Lovely write...hugs always, Charlie Brandy Nicole May 10, 2019 at 1:51 PM Thank you Charlie. Your thoughts truly humble me. Such a wonderful compliment. I appreciate you and your thoughts. Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May May 10, 2019 at 4:31 AM Very nicely penned Brandy...best wishes.. Brandy Nicole May 10, 2019 at 1:49 PM Thank you Joseph. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Maria Williams May 9, 2019 at 5:03 PM Where the Bold dare to go 'beyond the surface'. A great scribble Brandy, I like the way your mind ventures....Maria Hugs Brandy Nicole May 9, 2019 at 7:58 PM Such a wonderful thing to say. Thank you Maria. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2019 at 11:56 AM - A unique writing, Brandy :) - An end line that says a lot .... love it :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Brandy Nicole May 8, 2019 at 11:13 PM Thank you Anne-Lise. The beginning curls around each word, until meeting at ending thought. Making the message complete. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. May 7, 2019 at 7:14 PM Wonderfully and skillfully done Brandy Nicole May 7, 2019 at 10:12 PM Thank you Allen. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp May 7, 2019 at 9:29 AM Your words invite, perhaps even ask the reader to look deep down. A reaching out very artfully rendered. Brandy Nicole May 7, 2019 at 12:11 PM Thank you Lawrence. It possible to go deeper than imagined. These words hold truth. You and your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael May 7, 2019 at 5:26 AM That's good and should be read well...it's a wonderful thing to get beyond the surface...Lovely write... Brandy Nicole May 7, 2019 at 11:53 AM Thank you Arturo. When lingering beyond the surface, so much is revealed. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf May 7, 2019 at 4:43 AM Through your words, you are slowly allowing us to see beyond your surface, to see the beautiful person that you are. Keep writing these beautiful scribbles my sweet friend as we get to know you better. All my best to you. John Brandy Nicole May 7, 2019 at 11:15 AM Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say about me and my poetry. I am always writing from the heart, so the reader should be able to see the depth of me. Your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit May 6, 2019 at 4:20 PM Such is the magic of purposeful intent...when invisible becomes visible..beautifully written, as always, Brandy. I love the way each line reveals more till the soul makes a connection. Brandy Nicole May 6, 2019 at 11:25 PM Thank you Vijay. You have always been able to see the surface and beyond. Yes, these words connect just as you have stated. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Silent One May 6, 2019 at 3:00 PM Blueprint of reality is a wonderful line... only a few can see beyond the surface... They are the keepers... Great poetry as always.. Brandy Nicole May 6, 2019 at 11:23 PM Thank you Silent One. Your thoughts hold so much truth. One should always look beyond the surface. To see so much more. ~ Brandy