Seren Roberts Poet Verse

Beyond the Sun- Help Me Name It Contest

Beyond the gaze of the sun lies paradise
The lights on the horizon entice
dreamy thoughts of many men
their hopes and dreams when
prayers sent
the
air is rent,
with love so sincere
afraid, yet wanting to hear,
love blossoms, will wings of hope suffice.
Beyond the gaze of the sun lies paradise




My middle word is the

Penned  10 February 2015

Form should be called centrifugal

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Arlene Smith February 21, 2015 at 4:38 AM Didn't attempt this one, but regardless of the form, this is simply stunning, dear Seren.. Hugs..narlwne Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 7:05 AM It was an incredibly tough challenge Arlene - my poem took about 3 hours to write over 2 days - think it is the longest I have ever spent writing one poem:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper February 14, 2015 at 11:14 PM Great poem, it is so difficult to follow the form but you have made it seem so easy the flow is perfect. I am sure that Andrea will love what you have created. Love Shane xxx

Jan Allison February 10, 2015 at 7:58 AM like your take on the theme and then name of the form - very clever:-) Hugs Jan xx Seren Roberts February 21, 2015 at 11:10 PM Its strange, hard to work out a central word,thx for the comment Jan.....Seren

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 10, 2015 at 4:33 AM Love your exquisite write Seren,, love the powerful form,, absolutely perfect ! Seren Roberts February 21, 2015 at 11:09 PM Thx Dr Upma, glad you liked it ....Seren