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Beyond the Rainbow

My hopes became big and bold The mind could no longer hold They grew wings of lofty desire On birds flying in the squally air. Through the arch of rainbow hue To the misty horizon they flew Where the shrouded sun would try Paint setting colors on cold and moist sky. They flew in a flock through the cloud Making designs that made them proud I tried long to decode the pattern Some I could, many I couldn’t discern But the flock made new motifs in flight Allured me to be with the flying birds of delight. I couldn’t reach them, gave up in the long run They all flew away, I waited for their return For if hopes on wings of birds subsist They fly away beyond the winter mist. So, I was in the middle of nowhere At the edge of my winter severe And wished the birds that flew away Would return to me someday And into dream butterflies they would turn So real I could touch their colors that would burn So near I could hear their wings quiver Beyond the rainbow they won’t disappear ever. Posted : January 31, 2018 January 19, 2023 For Brian Strand No, 1172 Contest

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Date: 3/2/2018 7:47:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Subimal. Congrats on your win. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/2/2018 11:50:00 PM
Thank you, Line for your appreciation.
Date: 3/1/2018 6:22:00 PM
Congratulations Subimal on your fantastic win with your beautiful poem.. enchanting imagery.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 3/2/2018 12:17:00 AM
Thank you,Susan.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:14:00 AM
great imagery and love the rhyme scheme, I like to write like that too :)thank you and congratulations on your placement :) -luloo
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Date: 3/2/2018 12:17:00 AM
Thank you, Laura for liking the poem and for placememt.

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