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Beyond the Moon

Skyward glance, if for a breath, And tell me what you see. Beyond the moon, among the stars... Ah--the possibility!

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Casarah Nance

Date: 4/21/2014 9:37:00 PM

:) some may see emptyness, some may see blight. i glance to the stars beyond the moon and i see a forever night. (and maybe a russian satellite)

Mel Merrill
Date: 4/22/2014 12:26:00 AM

I see forever night...I like that. Nice of you to be the lone commenter on this lovely poem. Here's a thought. Why don't you just move in and save me all this G-damn typing? lol. Thanks, coolness--for reals. xoxo mel